The Thistledown Fairy's Crown

Thistledown wus his name and sometimes he stung, well actually his stem stung. The stinkers gave him a bad name, they did! Handsome wus he. Aye, the ladies loved him. Coming near to his full bushy head of royal purple pomp, thought he smelled good too, they did, bees to his honey.

Summer time was his time, the time to bloom. His thorns served as fairy swords. An', on mass, he an' his guarded the fey's mound. Thistledown kept the cows from trampin' the wee ones. An' the cow plops from offendin' the Royal's wee noses. No hoof falls made treacherous the field's lay. 

Suren, he wus sharp this fine boyo. He did 'ave a soft side, a sure sweetness. When fall's goddess Mordron* brought the chill down, he softened. Queen Mab* sent fey to catch his whitened crownin' glory, as each strand, a silken treasure, soft fell and so, Ole Thistle lost his head, for from his crown, and its down, wur made sheets of silken softness for the Tuatha De Danaan's* beds. 

*Goddess Mordron/Welsh mythology, Modron ("divine mother") 
* Queen Mab of the Fairy
* Tuatha De Danaan pre-Christian gods represented as heroes or fairies.
[Tribes of the goddess Dana]
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October 20, 2013 at 9:42 PM
Debbie, nice Fairy Dust, winning poem........... love ~SKAT~
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October 17, 2013 at 5:41 PM
I love the Irish accent that you put into this poem. It makes the reader feel like they are right inside the story. A very whimsical tale of fantasy, Debbie! Great work, I enjoyed it! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the nice comments, once again!
Hamilton Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 4:23 PM
a lovely story Debbie congrats on fine win Shadow x smile
Guzzi Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 11:52 AM
He was a flower I turned into a fairy!!
A   Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 11:02 AM
nice win.PD
D. Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 10:36 PM
good poem. nate
A   Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 5:02 PM
Debbie, :-) Congrats in Mystic's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" fun contest... God Bless*LINDA
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January 24, 2013 at 4:44 PM
congrats on your win Debbie
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January 24, 2013 at 12:47 PM
Debbie congrats on your win. A great write of mythology my friend. Warm S lies, Connie
Eastman Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 11:57 AM
Intreguing write. Congratulations on your win.
Squyres Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 10:44 AM
Your inkwell is scholarly...your quill quite lovely when it flows in the land of fantasy !! Enjoyed your fantasy !! Congratulations on your win!
Ober Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 9:52 AM
This is wonderful :) Congrats!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 9:09 PM
congrats Debbie on another fine write and win for fantastic free verse.. amazing lines of poetic art luv..
Brown Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on your super win Debbie. Love, Carol
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March 4, 2012 at 10:27 PM
I would have expected that this way you at all! Anyway, this is excellent! I have a personal attraction to poems written in dialects, and this would have passed off easily as a classic poem from the middle ages! Very much enjoyed, and I would love to talk to you over soup mail for advice on my poems!  -KMD
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 11:34 AM
Thank you for always sharing your excellent poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Debbie. I hope you have a great weekend filled with inspiration. I will be back the first of the week and hope to see more of your poetry posted here to read. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 6:53 PM
Ahh....a merry tale, from a fair thee well. It should be a classic fair tale, as long as he stays out of my garden.....LOVE IT! ps...soup mail ! :)
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March 1, 2012 at 6:53 PM
enjoyed
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