The Thirteen Steps

"come fluttering words, come drifting words to me  . . . a Rambling Poet."


  The rising sun,  shone into her room
    takes a moment, to gather her thoughts
      gowns her morning attire with pride
        moves into her garden,astonishing nature

          Song birds and Sky Larks, fill her ears with music
            the morning air, so pure into her lungs
              last nights proposal, from her childhood sweetheart
                dwelling but, knowing what her answer will be

                   Life feeling exhilerating, future so bright
                     as the perfumed rose plant,  poised on her sill
                       her futre holds happiness,children, how many ?
                         her husband to be, awaits her response.
                       
                
Sponsor      Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ 

  Contest   What is she thinking . . 

Wounds by wayside.
 
P. Beadnall...  16/7/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/28/2011 1:11:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Constance,Paul
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Date: 7/28/2011 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your special poem placing in Constance La France's "What is she thinking" contest Paul. Love, Carol
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 7/28/2011 8:01:00 AM
Cheers Carol,always appreciated blessings Paul
Date: 7/27/2011 11:52:00 PM
Congrats Paul on an amazing win with awesome lines of poetic art luv..
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Paul Beadnall
Date: 7/28/2011 6:17:00 AM
THANK YOU very much Linda - Marie,appreciated ..BLESSINGS Paul
Date: 7/21/2011 9:16:00 AM
terrific mate...deserves the best.........Jack
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Date: 7/21/2011 7:17:00 AM
It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us Paul. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2011 3:19:00 PM
amazingly beautiful Paul.. good luck in the contest luv.. this is a breathtaking write on the theme and photo luv.. enjoyed.. my entry is Wounds by Wayside.. tragic ..but hopefully good enough to win..
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Date: 7/16/2011 10:09:00 AM
enchanting, romantic,fantasy,joy,feelings abound,mysterious. I really like this Poem! terrific write. best of Luck in the contest...My regards
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