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The Things Keeping Me Up At Night

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Breathing in God’s word; filling my lungs with his grace. I let fly out of sight the things keeping me up at night. I harness my husband’s hand - it is in plain reach. His knuckles are ruddy, veined with integrity. I feel safe in his grasp, even as he dreams. Moreso, my Lord’s palm, does love and protect; The strong hold of God’s hand surrounds me like a shield. My breath is eventone; I am relaxed. Not so those who lie to their partners, who drink and sleep all day. The sun gets gritty behind their lids; their eyes itch. The twitching of the tales they must spin, attempt to remember then hit those who won’t surrender to the tall tales and white lies they utter. Under a soft blanket with my ever after; happily we joy and suffer for we know we are planted in heaven; its waters aplenty, its fruits of harmony and rest, its communion with the living not the dead. when you lie down, you will not be afraid; when you lie down, your sleep will be sweet.* 8/30/2021 *Proverbs 3:24 NIV

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Date: 9/13/2021 8:47:00 AM
to be true to our love one is pleasing to God. nicely done
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2021 10:33:00 AM
Thank you, Weston!
Date: 8/31/2021 6:40:00 AM
Beautifully written, Kim. So pure and genuine! Just lovely :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2021 9:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear friend!
Date: 8/30/2021 11:09:00 PM
The contrast of good and evil. Very inspirational. hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2021 9:03:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 8/30/2021 7:44:00 AM
A truly beautiful poem, Kim, of love and feeling content.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2021 8:34:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 8/30/2021 6:53:00 AM
Superbly done in elegant voice, Kim. Excellent vocabulary venerating the one you love. Enjoyed the poem throughout--especially the harmony of last two stanzas.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2021 8:34:00 AM
Thank you, dear Vijay!
Date: 8/30/2021 6:24:00 AM
- The night is filled with thoughts, which we can not let go ... the pictures behind the eyelids ... I know these sleepless nights, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2021 6:52:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise! I pray you have peaceful nights.

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