The Thief

THE THIEF  

I circle you slowly,
blow in dust from the south,
I smother your nose,  
and breathe in your mouth.

I force you to strangle, 
to spit up black mash,
Stinging your tongue,  
turning lashes to ash. 

I can make myself hotter, 
I’ll broil your braids, 
then sauté your ankles,
and french fry your legs . 

I’m subtle... at first! 
You won’t know I’ve begun. 
By the time that you catch me, 
I’ve already won.    

I lick your feet, 
with orange and red. 
I vortex upward, 
and shout “Oz” to the dead. 

I am ravenous and chew: 
your things as they burn, 
a dog or a bobble, 
your mom in her urn. 

I drink to absorb, 
your birdbath and dew, 
the juice from wild plants, 
and maybe from you. 

I spit out chimneys,
some tiles, a plate. 
It’s nothing personal;
it’s how I create. 

I devour round mountains, 
snack on redwoods and oaks,
taste your clothing and groceries, 
and burp down cold cokes. 

I’ll see you next summer, 
when the solstice draws near! 
As you sleep on a beach towel,
sip your tea, or drink beer. 

When your roses are plump
and your sunsets are deep, 
I will rise from the Earth
and I’ll take what you keep. 

-by Edlynn Nau 
©August 27, 2018 
Dedicated to all those enduring 
the California Fires.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/5/2018 8:15:00 AM
Your poem is an excellent projection of personification, Edlynn. So pleased I stopped by to read this expressive poem today. Fire can be such a gentle servant, but as a master he shows no mercy!! Warm regards // paul
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Date: 1/12/2019 2:39:00 PM
My cousin lost his house this summer along with three other friends. They sift endlessly through rubble (I think for therapy & to deal with denial) but don’t find much. Fire is a harsh teacher about possessions and the impermanence and the value of living things (down to our pets, trees, wildlife). This one got some attention because Fire as “a person” and as “a creator” was rather a curious bend to most. If you lose all then, you must recreate a life and you are forced to take inventory of what you value. The grief is just enormous making most almost numb. Thank you so much for giving this a read Paul. I’ve MISSED so many of you!
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