The Thaw

The thaw was in full force,
washing the sleepers from the Mothers eyes;
sand scouring her cheeks with a babies blush
whisking the leafy crumbs from the corners of her lips
as it chattered down the stream bed.

From the highland where it begins, nearest the sun;
sparrow song fills the air and robins red breasts pair.
Brittle branches snap, twigs unite with winter grass 
making nesting down for finch chicks.
Lavender blue crocus, fairy eyed peek at the morn
winter beds now color bursting less forlorn.

Children, milk white, cream, and coffee 
rosie cheeks warming in spring light squeal
in playgrounds on squeaky swings and toasty slides.
The thaw in full force, as undisturbed
by the still chill nights, as the pebble in the stream 
longing for the voyage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Souders Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 3:39 PM
Brittle branches snap, twigs unite with winter grass,,, I love this line.Lavender blue crocus, fairy eyed peek at the morn winter beds now color bursting less forlorn. this one to, such talent, great write Johnathon
Bowen Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 5:56 PM
Yummy discriptions and imagery! I loved this poem...is is really quite original and flawless~ Nice flow this has to offer ~ Perfection in a free verse style....it all comes together very simply and is fun to the reader to feel the vibe this gives~ Just delightful~!!! Take care of YOU! jane at the soupie...
Gass Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 5:08 PM
Beautiful poetry from a beautiful poetess, my talented friend! Your imagery is outstanding, Deb! This is such a delightful read. Love ya, Robin
Chircop Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 4:17 PM
nature at its best,i can view the whole scenery,well described,very nice indeed,my friend-charma
Winter Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 2:08 PM
Exceptional observations so well penned. Such beauty in your words. Imagery like no other. Your style so unique and brilliant. Love, Shar
Atanacio Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 12:52 PM
this was really well done--kudos :)
Shango Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 12:43 PM
Here is a keen sense of observation put into words most inspiring for those who love nature. Impressive again, a tender hearted poem of delight. Love and peace, my friend.
Caliri Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 12:41 PM
This is extremely well done. It reminds me slightly of a poem I wrote once called, "Our Season," though this seems to have incredibly more clarity, depth, and vision somehow. Like it a lot.
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