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intent not yet energised poised animation meld with the void, oh hermit hearts celebration ~ feel soundless thunder hark sound of one hand clapping noumenon wonder 16-June-2021 Seguidilla Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula Syllable counts: 7-5-7-5 … 5-7-5 Rhyme sequence: abcb ded

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/10/2021 11:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Have a blessed day..........

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/10/2021 7:48:00 PM

Thank you, dear Paula!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/9/2021 8:39:00 PM

Beautiful creation. Congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/9/2021 9:20:00 PM

Thank you, Chris!

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/9/2021 6:27:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, with your words of wisdom poetically prevailing. God bless you.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/9/2021 7:40:00 PM

Thank you, Beata!

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/9/2021 4:06:00 PM

Admirable (smiling), US, all in sync, flow-words-imagery, exceptionally done my friend, thank you for your participation and your honorable placement, Aloha!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/9/2021 7:42:00 PM

Happy you liked it, William! Thanks for hosting such an interesting contest!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/15/2021 11:36:00 PM

one hand clapping!- wastage of energy

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/15/2021 9:59:00 PM

I'd like to see you clapping with one hand....maybe sapping a thigh :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/15/2021 10:01:00 PM

This has to do with magnetic electricity, with soma nectar dripping in the heart centre, with the reverberation Ohm