The Tears That Pool In the Dark Corners of Bright Rooms

These tears that pool
In the dark corners of bright rooms
Monsoons couldnt wash them away
These are the ones that define us
The ones that sit in the recesses of our minds 
Rusting away at what we think is our core
Provoking the winds that blow closed our shutters and open our doors

These winds that blow fierce 
Through your forest and across your bay
You can't catch them in your sails
They are not meant to move you
But to ruffle your feathers
And bring waves to your seas
To shake everything that you thought was serene

And to bring on the tears that pool 
In the dark corners of bright rooms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 4/4/2013 8:13:00 PM
you got some fine lines up there Joanna , thank you for reading my "RED" have a great day ;}
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Date: 3/26/2013 8:52:00 PM
I agree with Red... great line! Another great write, my dear Joanna! Hugs xoxox
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Date: 3/26/2013 3:21:00 PM
The tears that pool in the dark corners of bright rooms... A brilliant line and a haunting idea. A poem that needs reading and re-reading. -Red
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Date: 3/26/2013 10:29:00 AM
Exquisite, Joanna! Evocative, and deeply moving ... :-)
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Date: 3/23/2013 10:15:00 AM
beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!
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