The Tears of Stars

I marvel at the tears of stars
that loudly blush as they pass Mars

Toward earth they fall in streams of dust
on cosmic winds that swirl and gust

No doubt it seems a madman’s tale
a rotund lie of cosmic scale

I ask you though, with much chagrin
please wake that child that naps within

Though hard to see with grownup eyes
The puerile heart unveils their guise

Near tranquil ponds where sorrow feeds
they land and spark among the reeds
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Great write and win ...Congrats
Grasso Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Beautiful, David! Congratulations on your placement in the contest! ...Fran
May Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Beautiful write David...very nice ending...GL in the contest
Leiser Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 4:49 PM
This poem is exceptional, David! Such lovely metaphors, and masterfully written! 7+ and a fave :) Should be at top of contest!
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August 22, 2016 at 2:37 PM
I agree with Linda...It is a beautiful write. My best regards, David. :) john P.s A worthy 7!
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