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The Teardrop

I am like the teardrops misting my eyes, and like my lover, whom I had to let go, one tear is now sliding down my cheek; oh, how I wish that my love were crying now for me, and that like this one tear, his hand was warmly caressing my cheek! Oh, that his mouth could be again on my mouth, like this teardrop that has fallen to my lips. I would be this tear but sadly dying on his mouth

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Date: 6/21/2023 11:53:00 AM
Enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 6/19/2023 12:51:00 AM
Superb, both in shape and content. I often read your poems on love lost. This is the best. Hugs.
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Date: 6/18/2023 4:04:00 PM
That's beutiful Andrea. You formed a heartfelt wish, likened it to your tear and formed it into a tear. All in one heartfelt poem. Accolades!
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Date: 6/18/2023 3:00:00 PM
WOW! A romantic and emotional poem in the shape of a tear. Creative poetry my friend. A real tear jerker. :-( Have a great week, Andrea. Bill
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Date: 6/18/2023 1:19:00 PM
A sad yet intense moment. Feeling the loss of having to let go.
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Date: 6/18/2023 10:55:00 AM
Emotional, sad, and romantic poem. My applause.
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Date: 6/18/2023 8:13:00 AM
the saddest write dear poet....lump in throat....you've done a fantastic artisan's amalgamation uv poesy and visual art here in your "Shape"! Have a wonderful upcoming Summer Andrea Dietrich ;) much love, james
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Date: 6/18/2023 5:31:00 AM
Andrea Andrea Andrea. Good Morning. This is gorgeous poetry and I am speaking solely of your words and theme. Yes, without saying, your execution on the format is marvelous. I'm certain this took a while to execute. In short, your poetic ability and skill shine. Thank you for sharing with us. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings always (smile)
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Date: 6/18/2023 4:53:00 AM
How romantic! Lovely art, Andrea.
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Date: 6/18/2023 4:00:00 AM
a very sweet & clever write here, my friend - very tricky to do, I'd imagine
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Date: 6/17/2023 7:20:00 PM
Impressive! Good luck and great job.
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Date: 6/17/2023 6:27:00 PM
beautiful calligramme, enjoyed the form as well
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Date: 6/17/2023 5:37:00 PM
Very nice, poem Andrea. Very emotional.
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Date: 6/17/2023 4:29:00 PM
Andrea, Not one word wasted in this Shape's tear. -Richard
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