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The Teacher

“The teacher who walks in the shadow of the temple, among his followers, gives not of his wisdom but rather of his faith and lovingness.” 
                                 - Kahlil Gibran, "The Prophet," page 56, copyright 1923 

Time stands still in the rainbow window of the soul 
Mixed in colorful kaleidoscopic clouds 
Awaiting His return 
Anticipating the spiral staircase descending from Heaven 
Like a tornado about to touch down, 
I sit motionless in a dreamlike delirium state 
Gazing. Hazing. Raising my hands slowly into the air, 
I prayerfully praise His name as Wonderful Counselor 
I shall do my best to live by His excellent examples 
Of compassion, forgiveness, and charity 
He gave the ultimate sacrifice for my sins 
So, I sing His hymns unto the four winds 
In hopes He will hear my voice vibrating 
In hopes He will hear my heart humbling 
In hopes He will return soon 
Especially during my lifetime of longing. . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 9/23/2024 8:32:00 AM
Dearest Benjamin I am delighted with your beautiful poem! It is inspiring and very well written! I enjoyed the imagery and the fact that you were giving the highest praise to THE TEACHER who is above all. Thanks for entering my contest and congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 9/23/2024 8:03:00 AM
honest write. congratulations on your win dear poet. happy writing.
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Date: 9/9/2024 1:52:00 PM
Dear benjamin very sincere and hearfelt poem this, i also must point out kahlil gibran that youv metioned there , quoted, he is one of my fave writers. In your poem i love also the opening lines very much and how youv expressed such gratitude so sincerely to the divine teacher! Pleasure reading best wishes for the contest
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