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“The teacher who walks in the shadow of the temple, among his followers, gives not of his wisdom but rather of his faith and lovingness.” - Kahlil Gibran, "The Prophet," page 56, copyright 1923 Time stands still in the rainbow window of the soul Mixed in colorful kaleidoscopic clouds Awaiting His return Anticipating the spiral staircase descending from Heaven Like a tornado about to touch down, I sit motionless in a dreamlike delirium state Gazing. Hazing. Raising my hands slowly into the air, I prayerfully praise His name as Wonderful Counselor I shall do my best to live by His excellent examples Of compassion, forgiveness, and charity He gave the ultimate sacrifice for my sins So, I sing His hymns unto the four winds In hopes He will hear my voice vibrating In hopes He will hear my heart humbling In hopes He will return soon Especially during my lifetime of longing. . .

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Date: 9/23/2024 8:32:00 AM
Dearest Benjamin I am delighted with your beautiful poem! It is inspiring and very well written! I enjoyed the imagery and the fact that you were giving the highest praise to THE TEACHER who is above all. Thanks for entering my contest and congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 9/23/2024 8:03:00 AM
honest write. congratulations on your win dear poet. happy writing.
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Date: 9/9/2024 1:52:00 PM
Dear benjamin very sincere and hearfelt poem this, i also must point out kahlil gibran that youv metioned there , quoted, he is one of my fave writers. In your poem i love also the opening lines very much and how youv expressed such gratitude so sincerely to the divine teacher! Pleasure reading best wishes for the contest
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