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Poetry/Verse/the tattered box of decorations
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1597-262-12
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La  France

Written, November 12, 2023
For the International Contest, Bite Size Poem, No. 76, Judged 11/17/2023
Sponsor, Line Gauthier

Third Place

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"Christmas is a box of ornaments that have 
become memories ...  and part of our heart."

                                    Quote by _Constance

 
I am holding again the tattered boxes of Christmas decorations inherited from my mom and grandma, they are old and fragile and full of memories, I touch each one with love and respect, I have never changed the boxes, they remain ragged as always, as if they were just put away by mom and grandma, so tenderly, and I weep as I hang each ornate Christmas ball and little angel.

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Date: 11/13/2023 6:37:00 AM
Yes, yes. It was always that way in my family, too, & while the older the orna- ment, the more fragile, th more full of memories, almost revered. Hmmm thank you. Such a dear thought. I never considered it that deeply before. Thank you again!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/14/2023 1:08:00 PM
Sally, thank you so much for your comment and compliment, the ornaments took on more importance to me after the death of my grandma and mom, now they are are fragile memories, blessings
Date: 11/12/2023 5:13:00 PM
You have such a tender heart, Constance.
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:10:00 PM
Lin, thank you so much for that lovely comment, blessings
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