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Poetry/Free Verse/the tattered box
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1695-937-24
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, December 24, 2024
For the International Contest, Bite Size, No 96
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 12/30/2024

Honorable Mention

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the tattered box


have a box of sadness that I keep upon a shelf
old and tattered from being opened too many times
inside are the fallen tears of my collected sadness
in that box dwells all my pain, sorrow, regret and grief
now, it is Christmastime and I need to open it again
     so, I can dwell with the memories for just awhile
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Miller Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 1:21 AM
Great emotions, and, as usual so well written, congratulations
La France Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 6:04 AM
Terry, thank you for the visit, compliment and congratulations ~
Gauthier Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 7:14 PM
Beautiful feelings expressed ~ L1 I think you meant noun 'shelf' vs verb 'shelve'
La France Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 6:08 AM
Line, thank you so much for the contest, the compliment, and the Honorable Mention, appreciate ! I have corrected my error on L1 now thank you for letting me know about it ~
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 9:29 AM
Melancholy beauty, Cinstance
La France Avatar
December 27, 2024 at 11:34 PM
Andrea, thank you for the visit, comment, and compliment~
Read Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 2:53 AM
I know the feeling Constance, hope you had a peaceful Christmas day God bless. xx
La France Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 3:40 AM
John, thank you for the visit and comment, yes, I think many know this feeling, I had a lovely Christmas with family, blessings ~
Greenhough Avatar
December 25, 2024 at 10:40 PM
Sadness at Christmas is difficult to forget. Many find joy in holidays, others find grief. I hope the holidays become easier.
La France Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 3:41 AM
Hilda, thank you for the visit to my poem and the comment, many have sadness at Christmas, I had a nice Christmas day with my family, blessings ~
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