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The Taste of You

the years haven’t dulled my love for you
more than ever i treasure
our growing closeness
i love you more with every passing day
and just can’t get enough of you
you taste like love on a spring day

we’ve had a life that’s blessed
we’ve only skimmed the surface
so much more to tackle
on our long bucket list
you taste like a delicate dessert
exquisite on my lips

how i long to rid your body
of the cancer so cruel and vicious
i’m helpless
with only warmth to offer
you taste to me
bittersweet
like precious tears 
on a winter’s solemn night



Read on air by invitation  ~  August 29, 2020  'LATE NIGHT POETS'

AP: 1st place 2021

Submitted on August 27, 2020 for contest STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (28) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
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Mcguire Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 9:36 PM
I feel your pain. No words can console. People care.
Gauthier Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 9:55 PM
Thank you very much, Timothy ~
Crabtree Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 4:16 PM
That write is so heartfelt. I hope everything will be ok. I can't even imagine what you're going through. Much love, Angela
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 6:32 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Angela. We all have our crosses to bear. I find staying in the moment is the best coping mechanism.
Gilmour Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 2:03 PM
Wow Line this reminded me of my sweet hubby for such a deep love that grew even stronger despite the cancer that ravaged his body. I know your love for each other will continue to grow stronger and I pray your time together will be truly precious as you cherish each and every moment my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 4:25 PM
Thank you so much for your moral support, Ann. Means a lot to me ~
Ibeh Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 3:34 AM
Exquisite write, Line:-) Congratulations on your deserving win!
Gauthier Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 6:36 AM
Thank you so much, Edward. Much appreciated.
Mitra Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 9:45 PM
This leaves a bittersweet taste in the mouth.....Congrats on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 6:37 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Carol ~
Gaul Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 3:28 PM
I was unaware but now I feel your suffering. As well, I witness your deep love and heartfelt affection for your partner in this difficult time. Thank you for sharing. Your challenge will be on my mind. Namaste.
Gauthier Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 7:24 PM
Thank you so much, Greg. Most appreciated. Namaste ~
Kauffman Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 12:11 PM
Sending prayers so your "love on a spring day" and "delicate dessert" may continue for you and your loved one. This is a beautiful and poignant write Line. Your warmth is an immeasurable blessing! Congratulations on your first place winner!
Gauthier Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 12:15 PM
Thank you so much, Sam. Most appreciated ~
Goldsmith Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your win. Life is full of good and sad. I find prayer in day and night. I do so understand. A wonderful write and picture. Enjoy your win with a hug................
Gauthier Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 12:16 PM
Thank you very much, Paula. Most appreciated ~
Mcguire Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:44 PM
My thoughts and prayers are with you and yours, I ask God to touch you and ease your fears and give you peace.
Gauthier Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 9:13 PM
Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated ~
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 2:35 PM
aww Line I have a huge lump in my throat, your poem hit home hard I know my hubbies cancer has brought us closer together than we could ever have dreamed was possible, just continue to support eachother and cherish every day:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 9:14 PM
Only someone going through it could understand ~
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