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The Taste of Nothing

As the words flow across my mouth without sound they sit on the tip of my tongue Unsaid the beautiful and out with the ugly My words overflowing out like nothing filling my mouth as it pours insanities splashing as it hits inside wripilling every part of you. Slandering's of beautiful lies As a bed of roses every word crowned with a thorn piercing every piece of peace. Casting stones with nothing invisible,tasteless, toxic endless ramblings of nothing inhaling wasting the exhale beating the inner me like a drum I hear thunder in your words but it still means nothing. I savour the moment of silence I've tasted nothing but the sorrow on your lips Your words became less of a fruit rotten to core once heaven rested on your lips and now there is nothing to taste anymore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/4/2016 8:25:00 PM
Angelica,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/4/2016 6:52:00 PM
Very good poem, great job.
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