Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- The Taste of Love In the Rain -

A smooth summer rain drums on the umbrella
In a city where everything flies so fast
She could see him from a long distance
The heart beats an extra stroke - or more
Eight years have passed since their paths parted
The fate had brought them back together
He meets her with a smile and a soft butterfly kiss
like a tune filled with joy

"Finally at home" he says and kisses her once more
The feeling tears her under the red umbrella
Every raindrop felt like a kiss from heaven
He is the most beautiful man she has met
Amor can rest, he knows this is true love









30/10/2018
Sun :) A-L Andresen :)
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Debbie Duncan November 16, 2018 at 1:15 PM Oh, I like this :) How you doing ? Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2018 at 1:19 PM - Thank you, Debbie :) - I'm ok :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jessica Thompson November 3, 2018 at 3:17 PM Such a lovely piece Anne-Lise. I really enjoyed the story it painted of true love. May today find you well. Hugs, jess Anne-Lise Andresen November 3, 2018 at 3:24 PM - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comment, Jessica :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven November 2, 2018 at 5:20 AM Hi Anne-Lise, this is a free verse gem. You use the scope of this form in such a wonderful way. Your creativity shines in this most excellent write. The love creates such wonderful moments and your words do paint such a wonderful canvas for the mind to view. Such a tender write that speaks to the heart. Has to be a fave Anne-Lise. A little gem from your golden pen. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen November 2, 2018 at 7:59 AM - Many thanks, Mike ... greatly appreciates your visit ... so glad you liked this and fav. it :) - Have a lovely Friday and enjoy a nice weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire October 31, 2018 at 12:34 PM Wow, when "every raindrop feels like a kiss from heaven," you know it is true love. This would have been a beautiful entry for the contest as you created an original scenario and made us care about the two characters. Beautifully done, Sunshine! Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2018 at 12:57 PM - Eve, want poems on rhyme Carolyn - I'm not so good at rhyming in English :) - Many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis October 31, 2018 at 12:11 PM How romantic and tender love story dearest Anne-Lise! Beautifully written! Loved it! Hugs XXX Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2018 at 12:58 PM - Many thanks for your visit and your lovely comment, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile October 31, 2018 at 9:27 AM Love ion the rain. one of the most romantic scenarios that I can think of! A sweet and lovey poem to read Anne-Lise and a lovely diversion from the anxieties of life xxoo Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2018 at 1:14 PM - If rain was love and romance ... I had drowned many years ago ... here it has almost rained every day since August, Mike - Many thanks for lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux October 31, 2018 at 8:45 AM This is so sweet! ;0) Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2018 at 1:08 PM - Many thanks .... always a pleasure to see you, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose October 31, 2018 at 6:16 AM so soft and tender , a soothe for the imagination and the heart. Have a wonderful day dear Smiley one. Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2018 at 1:07 PM - Thank you very much, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong October 31, 2018 at 4:43 AM There is something so romantic about the rain. I loved this delightful, romantic poem! xxoo Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2018 at 4:59 AM - In my "real life", Connie ... we have too much rain ... rain is wet and cold :))) - Many thanks for lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer October 30, 2018 at 6:34 PM very beautiful and touching, anne-lise! Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2018 at 4:56 AM - Thank you very much, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker October 30, 2018 at 5:49 PM very romantic poetry dear poet Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2018 at 4:55 AM - Thank you very much, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit October 30, 2018 at 3:55 PM Feelings of love and joy beautifully captured..you depicted that photo in your splendid words, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2018 at 4:54 AM - Vijay, thanks for lovely comment :) - Always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham October 30, 2018 at 3:35 PM Beautiful verse Sunshine, you've captured the scene well with your pen. Tom. Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2018 at 4:53 AM - Many thanks Tom .... always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands October 30, 2018 at 3:33 PM Beautifully written Anne-Lise. This is so nice. I enjoyed it very much :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2018 at 4:51 AM - Many thanks for your comment and visit, glad you enjoy it Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green October 30, 2018 at 3:03 PM This was beautiful my friend. You have captured the image wonderfully with your words. They really touched my heart because this is how it is suppose to feel. Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2018 at 4:51 AM - Many thanks for your comment and visit, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)