The Tanned Old Man and the Sea

The captain of the ship, an old man
Lies on the dry deck to get sun tan
The tempest causes shipwreck
He swims from the flooded deck
To the brown beach as fast as he can.

Losing the ship the captain is sad
Looks at tanned body, his marine fad
Layered by the auburn sand
He knows it is in safe hand
The wrecked old man from the sea is glad.

August 2, 2018
Syllable count : 9-9-7-7-9 (Checked on howmanysyllables.com)
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Gentry Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 1:59 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Many congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 1:49 AM
Thank you, Jan.
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August 5, 2018 at 1:46 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 5:46 PM
Nice little sea tale, my friend. Congrats on the winners' list.
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August 5, 2018 at 1:47 AM
Thank you, Andrea.
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