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The Tanned Old Man and the Sea

The captain of the ship, an old man Lies on the dry deck to get sun tan The tempest causes shipwreck He swims from the flooded deck To the brown beach as fast as he can. Losing the ship the captain is sad Looks at tanned body, his marine fad Layered by the auburn sand He knows it is in safe hand The wrecked old man from the sea is glad. August 2, 2018 Syllable count : 9-9-7-7-9 (Checked on howmanysyllables.com) Gift For A Lady

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Date: 8/7/2018 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/8/2018 1:59:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 8/4/2018 6:52:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/5/2018 1:49:00 AM
Thank you, Jan.
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Date: 8/5/2018 1:46:00 AM
Thank you, Jan.

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