The Tangible Paradise

I hate Thee
He let me into a dark midnight,
Like a solitary bee
With not even a spark of light

No way to roam,
No way to play
Nobody in that home
I was like idle clay.

Unable to open my eyes,
Unable to stand erect
And I was not yet wise
To judge what is correct.

But he gave me diet,
And a pond to swim.
He advised me to be quiet
And left me out on a limb.

Nobody to make a grin
Nobody to mingle.
Without out doing a sin
Why should I be single?

Let me out Fool!
Let me see this world.
Unable to swim in this pool
Understand I want to be thrilled.

Finally one day I was out 
Of the dark prison
Like a fresh young pout,
Resembling a newfangled bud arisen.

At present my life dwell 
in the middle of guileful souls
And I am there like a used up lapel
As people hearts are pricked by cunning hole

Now I am provided with amenities
And friends to relish
But they only left Obscenities  
And sufferings to embellish

Finally, now I realize
Place which I referred as tomb
Is an exquisite paradise
 And that is nothing but my mom's womb!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 12:12 AM
Post some more poems! I am off for a three day weekend. See ya later, Shiv!
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March 30, 2011 at 3:18 PM
very different! I started to understand it after that one stanza of the womb. haha. at the end! I recently wrote a poem kind of on this same topic: A Beautiful Thing!
Amsden Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 4:19 AM
Some nice imagery in there; "fresh young pout" and "new fangled bud' especially tickled my fancy. Keep up the good work.
Shreve Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 7:34 AM
nice rhyme
Sharma Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 2:34 AM
Hi Shivagamy :) Your poem up above is so touching and intriguing dear.. .. very well poured out ... :) thx for this beautiful piece of art... :) God Bless you :) take care :) Stay cheerful :)
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