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The Tale of Sandy the Snail

This is the tale of Sandy the snail... Who always wore her hair in a ponytail... She was different from others and I’m sure you’ll agree... As her colors were bright neon fluorescent green you see... She wasn’t content just moving slow... She wanted to run like a Marathon Pro... Up early each morning... When the Sun arose... She did pushups, pull ups and touched her toes... Alas... it was then she realized this was futile... As everyone knows... If she had feet, she would be more mobile...

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/10/2016 11:44:00 PM

This was refreshingly different. Like your subtle humor through out. Quite witty. And like I say, the title is the first thing you read, so make it good .... and this one was! Fun poem, KJ.

Genevieve Mika-Stevens

Date: 9/22/2015 10:55:00 AM

Just browsing around - came upon your adorable little poem here - delightful to read and a good way to start the morning..

Kj Force

Date: 10/4/2014 12:59:00 AM

That was really cute and creative. I look forward to reading other writings you have done. keep'em coming. Dr. Skye Berger

Kj Force
Date: 10/4/2014 1:08:00 AM

Skye...thank you for your comment...however I'm thinking there's a glitch in the site, as my picture/name appears...hopefullly this is only temporary, have a nice week-end

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/3/2014 12:43:00 PM

Cute! some days I feel just like your snail. BG

Kj Force
Date: 10/3/2014 12:59:00 PM

thanks for the kind words..glad you enjoyed...kj

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/3/2014 12:43:00 PM

Very cute tale! I liked it Kj! Cheers! love and light!Xxxxx D.

Kj Force
Date: 10/3/2014 1:00:00 PM

Cheers backatcha ! thanks for comment..have a great week-end