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The Sword, the Spear, and the Shield

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As the Nordic gods all gathered around for there is a treasure that I have found The Celtic gods all came as well To listen to what I had to tell For the Fenris Wolf has been unleashed no one shall save Odin from this beast Both the gods of Aesir and Vanir alike when comes Ragnarok will have to strike Brother against brother shall fight this day And the Midgard serpent no one can slay Thor takes three steps, after being bitten by the snake no man or god will ever see him awake As the Celtic gods, all looked on in awe None of them could foresee the fall of Thor So the Celtic tribe of Danaan formulated a plan to help the Norse gods they’d be led by Bran The mother of the gods, Danu was there too And the Morrigu joined in with their Ravens flew Nuada and Lugh led their warriors to the field With the sword of light, a magical spear, and shield But the Norns had weaved in runes this event and no matter how they tried they could not prevent The outcome may be bleak but there is some relief A man and woman survive in the Old Norse belief

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Date: 9/1/2017 6:24:00 PM
I wish I could write like that!!!!
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Date: 8/18/2017 11:14:00 AM
Great write wolf! Enjoyed the fireworks, and I am most fond of wolves:-)
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Date: 8/13/2017 9:40:00 AM
A great tale well told.
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Date: 8/1/2017 9:08:00 AM
Oh I love these kinds of poems. Great story Wolf! You have some great rhymes in this one, especially in the last stanza. It never ends well when the Wolves get out! - Dean
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Date: 7/31/2017 10:06:00 PM
I used to be called Freya, I embarce the beauty of this poem. peace and love xoxoxoxox
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Date: 8/3/2017 10:27:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Freyja /|\
Date: 7/31/2017 8:33:00 PM
Well well, you know I loved this poem, I would love to see some notes, a brief explanation of all the Gods, mentioned in the poem! I am sure for some would be fun to look up more info on their "fav" gods! This poem exemplifies your raw talent!
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Date: 7/31/2017 8:41:00 PM
The notes would be more work than the poem itself! lol. Once I'm done I'm done! All the info is on the net these days if others are inclined to delve further into it! But I shall ponder on doing it perhaps one day. Thank you, Great Bear /|\

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