The switch; no carrot'

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Dear Fellow soupers the below write Is another one I would have rather no have written, as i have put before Its under the pressure I feel myself, and see others under That I feel the urge to do something at this very fraught Point in history, the objects of this piece trudeau and a Whole Nation, the Nation most unfairly treated and held up To world ridicule by many ( all undeservedly ) their tyrant most Desevedly however ! One would think he should realise that There is no coming back from the springboard he walked out On' yet maybe its the fitting way for him to go.? Dragged Kicking and screaming from power.' Thus leaving a great Lesson for Canadians (and the wider world) perhaps he He is ignoring ( the writing on the wall ) unlike nebuchadnezzer Who was causex to defecate in the throne room by the Design of the one true God.' The true poet above all poets.' Maybe trudeau will also commit the same act? The God he Has mocked alone knows.' All blessings in Christ Jesus.!
House of commons, Quebec i think,? questions and
Odd answers; the air waxed thick..up to  point..' debate
Was staged, till the veil of control, almost got frayed.'
Yet oppression was to carry this bout' the speaker flipped
And switched it out, on the un-reigned shouts, a little grim?Yet a smile indeed he wore, above the sober; gown of..
( Law?) The switch on beasts maybe is banned? Whithin
The border of that land.? If one is there it must belong to
Historys annals, and in real sad songs, owned by the folk
And not one man? An heirloom albeit  not that grand.' I
For one observe such tricks, the denial of carrot 
And the weilding of  stick..Er i mean switch.!

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Date: 12/29/2023 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A creative write. God knows everything and He is watching.... Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/29/2023 12:39:00 PM
Hi Paula, its news to me.' I Have been busy getting a book out mind you..All blessings'
Date: 12/2/2023 4:49:00 AM
He is like so many others who take the Divine Power given them, the chance to do so much good for self, nation and world -- but fail miserably. I've seen it happen with entertainers, TV evangelists.... Maybe even a Pope. Sad to see History negatively repeat itself...allowing evil to continue perverting the soul of Man. God bless you my friend. My opinion, you speak truth.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/2/2023 6:35:00 AM
Hello Joe, I thank you for your Overview, everything has nuances and even a writer won't See some, because he will not Have invented the word structures, among other things May you be and remain well.'
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