The Swing

Gentle sway with breeze Seat’s heat abates, laughter fades Aestival evening
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Mohn Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 7:53 PM
terrific nuanced mood created Joseph...nicely written
Duet Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 1:08 PM
I love this haiku, Joseph, and I'm not a big fan of haikus but this one is so full of summer evening images. Lovely....
Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 11:16 PM
A great haiku, Joseph! Well done mate
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