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The Swing

Gentle sway with breeze Seat’s heat abates, laughter fades Aestival evening

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 6/7/2017 7:53:00 PM
terrific nuanced mood created Joseph...nicely written
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Date: 6/7/2017 1:08:00 PM
I love this haiku, Joseph, and I'm not a big fan of haikus but this one is so full of summer evening images. Lovely....
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Date: 6/6/2017 11:16:00 PM
A great haiku, Joseph! Well done mate
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