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The Sweetness of You

Sweetness pours out across her aching lips a dripping delight under candied apple eyes motionless with the mulberry tree in wonderment as the dainty honey bee dances with delight Closed eyes and daytime wishes overcome shy visions slipping out of shadow's view hushed breaths drawn a dewdrop melody heartbeats begging for a tiny sip of you Shifting emotions impossible to hold abreast a festal procession leading forth proposition slowly inhaling simple beauty left in pause light breaks her attention and a smile dawns

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/29/2017 1:40:00 PM
Sigh...So very beautiful..Exceptional..I am gladI got to read it Tim.A fave.
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Date: 5/28/2017 3:38:00 PM
I think I would have to travel 1000 years in the past to find this at times! :) Beautiful.
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Date: 5/28/2017 3:33:00 PM
enjoyed the slow- fire energy of romance... such a charming write, tim..huggs
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Date: 5/28/2017 10:42:00 AM
Beautiful and sweet, Tim:) astoundingly simple words when put together can create magic:)
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Date: 5/28/2017 8:02:00 AM
A pure pleasure to read.
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Date: 5/27/2017 8:24:00 PM
Sweet AND beautiful, Tim. Love this style. Keep it going forever!
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Date: 5/27/2017 4:22:00 PM
Hi Tim , Magical very descriptive enjoyable write :))))
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Date: 5/27/2017 2:41:00 PM
- A beautiful and sweet poem, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2017 12:18:00 PM
Oh, you lovers - how you make us ladies drool! Beautiful poetry, Tim.
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Date: 5/27/2017 10:44:00 AM
I like how you can put so much into a single moment. it's very visual and intimate.
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Date: 5/27/2017 10:42:00 AM
A beautiful and loving poem. With great imagery Tim, I love this!
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