Ann Gilmour Poet Free verse

The Sweetest Song

To hear the sweetest song as the Sun bids me goodnight 
a tune that saturates my soul with joyous jubilation and
perchance that I can only hear just one sound in my life 
a blackbird captivates my heart with his beguiling song
arriving on the very day, the day whence you had gone

Written 20th April 2019

Contest :APRIL 2019 PREMIER 7 FIVE LINES
Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Caren Krutsinger April 27, 2019 at 2:34 AM This poem has some alliteration lovingly through it, that made me happy as I read.

Demetrios Trifiatis April 21, 2019 at 3:24 AM Dearest, Ann, your comment on my poem RISEN and the information of the Sri Lanka blasts and the death of 138 people and of more than 560 injured, made me write a free verse SRI LANKA BLASTS.

Joseph P. DiMino April 20, 2019 at 11:29 PM Well done! Excellent poetry. Here's to a brighter morning--with new song and hope. Ann Gilmour April 22, 2019 at 1:47 AM Thank you so much Joe for your lovely comments. Good to meet you with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Demetrios Trifiatis April 20, 2019 at 11:12 AM Melancholic romantic poem, yet full of beauty and feelings dearest, Ann! good luck! Ann Gilmour April 20, 2019 at 5:32 PM So many thanks to you dear Demetrios for your wonderful comments and kind support. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Nette Onclaud April 20, 2019 at 9:19 AM how moving is this poignant write, anne... wonderfully crafted!...huggs Ann Gilmour April 20, 2019 at 5:29 PM Thank you so much Nette for your lovely comments and I really appreciate your visit - thank you! With kindest thoughts Ann xx