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The Sweetest Sensation

Passion,staring into lust,
Noses,sharing oxygen.
Our lips connect,
Lips start to stray,
Nibbling ears,kissing necks,
Closely drawn together,
Nipples piercing hairy chest,
Nails sink into back,
Head-board knocking the wall,

Knock knock,knock knock,

Deep moans,skin locked,
We counter attack,

Knock knock,knock knock,

Screams of pleasure,
Waking the whole block,

Knock knock,knock knock,

Nuclear explosion,
Volcano eruption,
AHHHH so hot,so hot,
The sweetest sensation,
 I ever got......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/15/2012 4:34:00 PM
Wow, I need a cold shower! Awesome write, right in my face, love it and also the other sweetest ones too! Thanks for you nice reviews also! Keep the pen handy, Andrea
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/15/2012 5:14:00 PM
go get it lol,thanks Andrea.pen and paper always on stand-by lol
Date: 10/6/2012 7:47:00 AM
Wow...loved the journey......you know how to write a poetic good time :D - Shaz
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/6/2012 10:18:00 AM
lol,thanks Shaz oxox
Date: 9/21/2012 6:02:00 PM
All I can say is Good Luck Man........Lol
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/21/2012 8:24:00 PM
got it ,lol,thanks Saleem
Date: 9/18/2012 1:37:00 AM
wow : ) that is hot. LUV~Sammie~
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Richard Palmer
Date: 9/21/2012 3:52:00 PM
see you are falling in love with my poems,keep it up oxoxox nuff luv
Date: 8/12/2012 7:26:00 PM
What a sensual piece you have penned! A thoroughly enjoyable read. Well done, and thanks for sharing :) ~hugs~ Aimee
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Richard Palmer
Date: 8/13/2012 11:26:00 AM
thank you ,Aimee
Date: 7/13/2012 11:22:00 AM
let's move the bed away from the wall
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/13/2012 1:01:00 PM
AWWWW,and break the ridim,lol,thanks Charlotte
Date: 7/7/2012 8:53:00 AM
Hahaha, well described. It's a jaw drop poem.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/7/2012 1:15:00 PM
mouth water dripping,lol,thanks Bhavna
Date: 7/6/2012 8:20:00 AM
WOW!!! HOT! HOT! HOT! I LIKE!!! Marty
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/6/2012 9:24:00 AM
turn up the heat,thanks Marty
Date: 7/5/2012 12:53:00 PM
I see what you mean!!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 7/5/2012 8:00:00 PM
hope you felt the heat,lol,thanks Kathryn
Date: 6/28/2012 4:33:00 AM
this is interesting, hugs... Chile.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/28/2012 8:57:00 AM
thanks Chile
Date: 6/26/2012 7:53:00 AM
very hut,hut,hut,.......and very imaginative,Ivy
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/26/2012 4:07:00 PM
writing is my passion,I love it,thanks Ivy
Date: 6/25/2012 10:40:00 AM
WOW SPECTACULAR IMAGERY DEAR FRIEND.HOT HOT HOT HOT I LIKE IT ALOT!!!!!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/25/2012 5:36:00 PM
burning lol,thanks Elliot
Date: 6/25/2012 10:03:00 AM
wow...lol don't wake up da block...lol..great poem :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/25/2012 10:23:00 AM
thanks Twana,I'll try not to,lol
Date: 6/23/2012 9:55:00 PM
. Brilliant poetic descriptions of THAT critical seconds from ''your" love moments .Thank you for sharing .jk
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/24/2012 8:11:00 AM
thanks Jay
Date: 6/23/2012 9:52:00 AM
nice write
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/23/2012 10:22:00 AM
thanks Kenisha
Date: 6/23/2012 8:57:00 AM
*fans herself feeling faint* "GASP!" my virtue has been compromised reading this lusty pen! thank you for enlightening my senses !
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/23/2012 9:12:00 AM
hope I didnt burn you,lol,thanks Lisa,love your comment
Date: 6/22/2012 5:59:00 PM
So that's why there is a little one in your photo.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/22/2012 11:10:00 PM
maybe,always leave the reader wanting more,lol,thanks Joann
Date: 6/22/2012 4:01:00 PM
Woooooohaaaaaa!!!!! This is right up there with RATED PG 13 WHEEEWWW EE.... GOT ME ALL HOT N BOTHERED WHY DON'T YA....HEEE... HOTTTTTT; HOTTTTTT!!!!!! This is going in fav s COLD SHOWER NOW PLEASE!!!!! :O hope I haven't upseted you soup fam is here to stay... Xox0 sweet+sour Carma.
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Carma Reed
Date: 6/22/2012 4:08:00 PM
BTW I BELIEVE THIS WOULD BE UNDER DIMINISHED HEXIVERSE BUT DON't QUOTE ME ON THAT BUT YOU CAN TRY. Lol... Still learning the forms myself hehee....
Date: 6/22/2012 2:26:00 PM
Whew, I need a cool shower! Loved it! Tanya
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/22/2012 2:34:00 PM
full the tub,lol,thanks Tanya
Date: 6/22/2012 2:24:00 PM
This is a powerful and sesnous poem! However, I don't think it is didactic. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/22/2012 2:33:00 PM
thanks Matthew,still learning,what is it
Date: 6/22/2012 2:03:00 PM
WOW! The sweetest sensation indeed... Great phrasing and imagery... and passion! BRAVO, Richard!! Keith
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/22/2012 2:32:00 PM
thanks Keith,try my best
Date: 6/22/2012 1:45:00 PM
Remember to put the pink champagne on cooling........Well done, nice. - Thank you for visit and comments my poem Richard.- Have a romantic weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/22/2012 2:32:00 PM
it is,lol,thanks Anne
Date: 6/22/2012 1:35:00 PM
Passionate..Thanks for stopping by...Karter thought fast on how to get rid of that green bean..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/22/2012 1:35:00 PM
My daughter had told me that he wouldn't eat them...Sara
Date: 6/22/2012 1:16:00 PM
: ) yes indeed, hot stuff for sure, love Elizabeth
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/22/2012 1:34:00 PM
very hot lol thAnks Elizabeth
Date: 6/22/2012 12:50:00 PM
Interesting to say the least...Peace to you.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 6/22/2012 1:33:00 PM
peace to you Steven
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