Richard Palmer Poet Didactic

The Sweetest Sensation

Passion,staring into lust,
Noses,sharing oxygen.
Our lips connect,
Lips start to stray,
Nibbling ears,kissing necks,
Closely drawn together,
Nipples piercing hairy chest,
Nails sink into back,
Head-board knocking the wall,

Knock knock,knock knock,

Deep moans,skin locked,
We counter attack,

Knock knock,knock knock,

Screams of pleasure,
Waking the whole block,

Knock knock,knock knock,

Nuclear explosion,
Volcano eruption,
AHHHH so hot,so hot,
The sweetest sensation,
 I ever got......

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Andrea Travis November 15, 2012 at 4:34 PM Wow, I need a cold shower! Awesome write, right in my face, love it and also the other sweetest ones too! Thanks for you nice reviews also! Keep the pen handy, Andrea Richard Palmer November 15, 2012 at 5:14 PM go get it lol,thanks Andrea.pen and paper always on stand-by lol

Shaz Cheesman October 6, 2012 at 7:47 AM Wow...loved the journey......you know how to write a poetic good time :D - Shaz Richard Palmer October 6, 2012 at 10:18 AM lol,thanks Shaz oxox

Saleem Durrani September 21, 2012 at 6:02 PM All I can say is Good Luck Man........Lol Richard Palmer September 21, 2012 at 8:24 PM got it ,lol,thanks Saleem

Samantha Fryzel September 18, 2012 at 1:37 AM wow : ) that is hot. LUV~Sammie~ Richard Palmer September 21, 2012 at 3:52 PM see you are falling in love with my poems,keep it up oxoxox nuff luv

Aimee Garside August 12, 2012 at 7:26 PM What a sensual piece you have penned! A thoroughly enjoyable read. Well done, and thanks for sharing :) ~hugs~ Aimee Richard Palmer August 13, 2012 at 11:26 AM thank you ,Aimee

Charlotte Puddifoot July 13, 2012 at 11:22 AM let's move the bed away from the wall Richard Palmer July 13, 2012 at 1:01 PM AWWWW,and break the ridim,lol,thanks Charlotte

Bhavna Khemlani July 7, 2012 at 8:53 AM Hahaha, well described. It's a jaw drop poem. Richard Palmer July 7, 2012 at 1:15 PM mouth water dripping,lol,thanks Bhavna

Marty Owens July 6, 2012 at 8:20 AM WOW!!! HOT! HOT! HOT! I LIKE!!! Marty Richard Palmer July 6, 2012 at 9:24 AM turn up the heat,thanks Marty

Katherine Braithwaite July 5, 2012 at 12:53 PM I see what you mean!! Richard Palmer July 5, 2012 at 8:00 PM hope you felt the heat,lol,thanks Kathryn

Chile D'Rhymez June 28, 2012 at 4:33 AM this is interesting, hugs... Chile. Richard Palmer June 28, 2012 at 8:57 AM thanks Chile

Ivy Vresk June 26, 2012 at 7:53 AM very hut,hut,hut,.......and very imaginative,Ivy Richard Palmer June 26, 2012 at 4:07 PM writing is my passion,I love it,thanks Ivy

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet June 25, 2012 at 10:40 AM WOW SPECTACULAR IMAGERY DEAR FRIEND.HOT HOT HOT HOT I LIKE IT ALOT!!!!! Richard Palmer June 25, 2012 at 5:36 PM burning lol,thanks Elliot

Twanna Irisha June 25, 2012 at 10:03 AM wow...lol don't wake up da block...lol..great poem :) Richard Palmer June 25, 2012 at 10:23 AM thanks Twana,I'll try not to,lol

Jayachandran Chakrapany June 23, 2012 at 9:55 PM . Brilliant poetic descriptions of THAT critical seconds from ''your" love moments .Thank you for sharing .jk Richard Palmer June 24, 2012 at 8:11 AM thanks Jay

Kenisha Shines June 23, 2012 at 9:52 AM nice write Richard Palmer June 23, 2012 at 10:22 AM thanks Kenisha

Lisa Cooper June 23, 2012 at 8:57 AM *fans herself feeling faint* "GASP!" my virtue has been compromised reading this lusty pen! thank you for enlightening my senses ! Richard Palmer June 23, 2012 at 9:12 AM hope I didnt burn you,lol,thanks Lisa,love your comment

Joann Grisetti June 22, 2012 at 5:59 PM So that's why there is a little one in your photo. Richard Palmer June 22, 2012 at 11:10 PM maybe,always leave the reader wanting more,lol,thanks Joann

Carma Sanderson June 22, 2012 at 4:01 PM Woooooohaaaaaa!!!!! This is right up there with RATED PG 13 WHEEEWWW EE.... GOT ME ALL HOT N BOTHERED WHY DON'T YA....HEEE... HOTTTTTT; HOTTTTTT!!!!!! This is going in fav s COLD SHOWER NOW PLEASE!!!!! :O hope I haven't upseted you soup fam is here to stay... Xox0 sweet+sour Carma. Carma Sanderson June 22, 2012 at 4:08 PM BTW I BELIEVE THIS WOULD BE UNDER DIMINISHED HEXIVERSE BUT DON't QUOTE ME ON THAT BUT YOU CAN TRY. Lol... Still learning the forms myself hehee....

Tanya Harrington June 22, 2012 at 2:26 PM Whew, I need a cool shower! Loved it! Tanya Richard Palmer June 22, 2012 at 2:34 PM full the tub,lol,thanks Tanya

Matthew Anish June 22, 2012 at 2:24 PM This is a powerful and sesnous poem! However, I don't think it is didactic. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Richard Palmer June 22, 2012 at 2:33 PM thanks Matthew,still learning,what is it

Keith Bickerstaffe June 22, 2012 at 2:03 PM WOW! The sweetest sensation indeed... Great phrasing and imagery... and passion! BRAVO, Richard!! Keith Richard Palmer June 22, 2012 at 2:32 PM thanks Keith,try my best

Anne-Lise Andresen June 22, 2012 at 1:45 PM Remember to put the pink champagne on cooling........Well done, nice. - Thank you for visit and comments my poem Richard.- Have a romantic weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise :) Richard Palmer June 22, 2012 at 2:32 PM it is,lol,thanks Anne

Sara Kendrick June 22, 2012 at 1:35 PM Passionate..Thanks for stopping by...Karter thought fast on how to get rid of that green bean..Sara Sara Kendrick June 22, 2012 at 1:35 PM My daughter had told me that he wouldn't eat them...Sara

June 22, 2012 at 1:16 PM : ) yes indeed, hot stuff for sure, love Elizabeth Richard Palmer June 22, 2012 at 1:34 PM very hot lol thAnks Elizabeth

Steven Henderson June 22, 2012 at 12:50 PM Interesting to say the least...Peace to you. Richard Palmer June 22, 2012 at 1:33 PM peace to you Steven

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