Shadow Hamilton Poet Villanelle

The Swarm

The fresh air sang after the storm
all was washed clean by the rain
the insects all started to swarm

Made people duck as they reform
they had made a very long train
the fresh air sang after the storm

They were buzzing as they reformed
the new hive now them would sustain
the insects all started to swarm

All snug now their honey would form
this hive would be their new domain
the fresh air sang after the storm

The combs of honey multiform
the happy humming quite insane
the insects all started to swarm

they are so happy to be warm
yet so many were lost or slain
the fresh air sang after the storm
the insects all started to swarm

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Richard Lamoureux December 16, 2013 at 4:58 AM I find this piece very interesting. Well done Shadow. Shadow Hamilton December 16, 2013 at 7:10 AM hi Rick interesting is good lol ty dear Shadow x smile hug

Donna Jones December 14, 2013 at 6:23 PM Cleverly done Shadow....loved it....PS.we have a honey bee colony ordered ..we pick it up in the spring...I can't wait!!!! Shadow Hamilton December 16, 2013 at 7:09 AM hi Donna that is wonderful you will love them. ty for reading and enjoying it Shadow x smile hug

Peter Dome December 13, 2013 at 7:29 PM Great write. love Bees. if only people worked together, like bees or ants, we'd have a better world. Best wishes. Pete. Shadow Hamilton December 14, 2013 at 2:16 PM very true Peter ty for kind comments Shadow x smile hug

Anne-Lise Andresen December 13, 2013 at 12:45 PM - A nice poem and messages, Shadow ! - I wish you a great weekend .... It's almost Christmas :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Shadow Hamilton December 14, 2013 at 2:18 PM hi Anne Lise ty dear hoping you have a great weekend too Shadow x smile hug