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12.03.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Write Five Beautiful Lines

Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France 
1st place in the contest

- The Swan Song -

                             ~ Swans tell stories of eternal love -
                                 the hymn of the earth ~ 
                                                         quote by poet

                         A flock of swans sings duets with the wind
                               where the shadows fall at an angle
                              Their beauty is an eternal spectacle
                                     sealed by divine sanctuary
                     Evening sky burns - almost incomprehensible sight
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Buehler Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 3:12 PM
Rapturously beautiful lines, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your win. :)
Poet Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 1:07 PM
Impressive descriptions, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your accomplishment.
Lane Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 11:31 AM
I'm happy to see this one a winner!
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March 15, 2025 at 9:58 AM
Lovely quote and five lines Anne-Lise, swans show the world what love is, and they do it with elegance and grace. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Beryl
Healey Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 9:48 AM
Wonderful description, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on the win.
Evans Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 9:39 AM
Lovely poem, congratulations. Hugs, M.
Cunningham Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 3:25 AM
Back with congratulations to you Anne-Lise, I'm in good company. Tom
mysore Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 2:26 AM
amazing - eternal spectacle. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
Beaufort Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 3:29 PM
Anne-Lise, the way you capture nature with words so perfectly, brings even more beauty to this world. You do make me smile. I could get addicted to this!!
Rodgers Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 7:07 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, your swans are breathtaking. You captured eternal love and nature's beauty with stunning imagery. I love swans! Thank you for this beautiful gift. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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March 13, 2025 at 12:15 AM
Can almost hear the famous music. I love swans. Often used them in my poems. Hugs.
Rolland Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 4:41 PM
great tribute, swans are not wild animals, they seek sometimes for my presence, i know places near my house to see them , you are right, they are very beautiful
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 2:06 AM
- Swans are wild animals, Yann - Yes, they are beautiful :) - Thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Gifford Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:52 PM
A beautiful picture and beautifully written lines, a perfect combination Anne-Lise. Good luck with contest, my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:22 PM
Beautiful birds too Anne Lise, the way the glide through the water. We have them on the Avon in town. Tom
Allison Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 3:06 PM
beautiful, simply beautiful lines and image Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 11:39 AM
You find the most beautiful pictures to accompany your writes, Anne-Lise. Your lines are truly lovely.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 10:35 AM
I enjoyed reading "The Swan Song" a beautiful write/picture. "Good Luck" We both did one. Hugs... Have a fun day as you write away..........
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