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Image result for pictures of someone in a swampI had a great uncle when I was a child who lived until my late teens. He was the black sheep of the family(I suppose). I have posted a short story about him as well. 

The Swamp Monster

Unkie, my friend or foe At night with a pin he'd stick me So he said; in his bed With him I did not sleep Had my own bed_no dread Unkie, my friend or foe Had a curved walking cane One hand was unusable He had harsh attitude He's so confusable Unkie, my friend or foe He had a bad sore leg He got burned in a wreck Running his homemade shine That was his one paycheck Unkie, my friend or foe Could be soft and loving Helped me out of the swamp When the swamp monster ate My shoes__ socks with one chomp
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Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 12:21 PM
- We are all different ... but, we humans judge by behavior ... - Great written, Sara :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 12:50 PM
Anne-Lise, yes, we do judge by behavior, dress, adornments, accessories, etc. Sometimes those that are dressed to draw attention are very unusual to downright dangerous and sometimes it is hard to distinguish between what is safe and what will get you hurt or killed. Thanks for stopping by. Sara K
George Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 5:06 AM
Quite an interesting story. I am sure it is fictional...! Perhaps you had an uncle whom you didn't like initially, but who turned out to be your savior later. I am sure he will stay green in your memory creating mixed emotions of dread and thankfulness.
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 7:34 AM
Well, Valsa, he definitely was my great uncle. He was my adopted father's daddy's brother. LOL..He was a character. I don't know in what order the horrible things happened to him, but he had a rough life. I posted a story about him on here. Sara K
Sharma  Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 4:47 AM
Oh wow, this is such a profound and unique poem from you, dear Sara! It conveys amazing skills of storytelling and reflects your uncle's persona in a deep meaningful essence.. Especially, how you've described that he would be a lil distant but later in years, proves to be a helping soul.. A very interesting write, indeed and your memories of him speak of his intriguing aura. Beautifully crafted tribute! Sending many best wishes and love your way. :)
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 7:32 AM
Why, thank you, Hiya. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K
Baker Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 9:51 PM
WOW! Sara, that was an intriguing poem. Very engaging and well written, my friend. Thanks for sharing your memories of Unkie with us through your fine poetry. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 7:31 AM
Like your new picture, Bill. Two lovely people. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 3:25 PM
This is kind of different from you. He sure sounds like a curious guy. I had a step uncle like that
Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 7:30 AM
Andrea, I don't know what he had been through in his life, but I am sure it wasn't a life like we would expect today. I am thinking maybe he was an abused child. I wrote a short story about him and it is posted on here. Sara K
Pandit Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 1:33 PM
Seems like he was one of a kind. No wonder he still occupies your memories, Sara. A fine tribute to Unkie.
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 2:19 PM
Yes, I will always remember him. Thanks for dropping by . Sara K
One Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 12:30 PM
This is very creative Sara... seems like unkie had a great imagination...Seems like a deeper meaning here.. maybe he scared you as a child, but then helped you our one day and you saw his nicer side...
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 2:18 PM
SO, Unkie was one of a kind with that being a bad side, but he also was soft and would help me out if he could. He gave me the curved end of the cane and pulled me out of the swamp(sticky mud) then got my shoes out as well. Thank you for stopping by. Sara K
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