The Sunshine Band

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One In Five Poetry Contest Roundel
Sponsored by: Joseph May Written 6//26/2023

The sunshine band, ember sunset. Stunning swans' graceful elegance Serenely swim, one can't forget. The sunshine band Overlay peace yet endlessness Cast, swayed in the balmy breeze, yet It displayed depth and eloquence; The sunshine band Loyalty to each other let These white feathered benevolence Dip their heads together, heart set. The sunshine band Image 1

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Valsa George

Date: 7/15/2025 12:13:00 AM

I have watched such an arresting scene many a time. Love the expression- 'sunshine band'. They swim and dip their necks together as if a dance band performing together. Lovely poem.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/29/2025 2:02:00 AM

I wish you very good luck in this contest my dear friend - you are so perceptive, creative and imaginative that you immediately explain with your eloquent writing the meaning depth and beauty of this poem as you do with all your others. I wish you luck but know, its a winner. Keep well Jenny

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/27/2025 12:11:00 AM

Beautiful words, Eve!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 6/26/2025 11:53:00 PM

Oh my, I would loveeee to see this sunshine band as well! How innovative and mesmerizing this poem is, as well as the theme! Wow, dear Eve, I'm in awe of your artistic wordsmithery as well and the sunset scene which you've skillfully painted with artistic brushstrokes! Loved reading this, sending best wishes and light to you always ~

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/26/2025 11:43:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The Sunshine Band" write with a great picture. Love Both... "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a fun day writing away..........