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The Sunshine and Shower

The sunshine has started writing the poetry A line or two it has already brought out On the white rectangular paper I left carelessly on the threshold Of the dawn and dusk No overt volition there had been Might be the absolute instructions From the deep inside Of the black ocean That drove away the guard When you opened the door Did I get the whiff? Of the breeze from the hills That had arrived surreptitiously To darken the sunshine With the rains and the silver mist I don't know Do you When exactly the dew waits On the blade of the leaf For the first sunlight to meet I know you will now enjoy Bringing out the lines Until it is a compact sonnet The condensed vapour for the shower A warm welcome The leaves wait To collect the rain drops The buds wait To relate to the rainbow The farmer has the seeds to sow This is the life Whether human or animal The same purple strife _________________________________ February 20, 2018 Sunshine and Showers - Poetry Contest Sponsored by :Robert Haigh

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Date: 2/23/2018 10:46:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Probir. Well done.
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Date: 2/24/2018 5:16:00 AM
Thank you, Line ...
Date: 2/21/2018 5:52:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Probir ... a wonderful first line .... - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2018 6:17:00 AM
thank you, Sunshine ...
Date: 2/20/2018 5:38:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Probir - I especially liked "I don't know Do you When exactly the dew waits On the blade of the leaf For the first sunlight to meet" Simply lovely.
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Date: 2/21/2018 6:18:00 AM
Thank you, Agnes ...
Date: 2/20/2018 3:48:00 PM
Another poem with so much great imagery, Probir..Good luck in the contest ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2018 6:19:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 2/20/2018 3:45:00 PM
very creative images in this one, Probir. Best of luck in the contest. wow, this contest is filling fast!
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Date: 2/21/2018 6:20:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea ...
Date: 2/20/2018 9:50:00 AM
Very well done Probir. Good luck in the contest :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2018 6:20:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Date: 2/20/2018 6:44:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your Probir. Well written, as always.best for a win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2018 6:23:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay ...

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