Ravindra K Kapoor Poet Free verse

The Sunshine

The Sunshine

The Sunshine was not far away from me in the sky,
Surrounded by clouds, 
It was piercing them, to spread its light.
My dreams and hopes too are rising like sea waves,
Touching the sky,
Oh, in such a lovely mood, I can feel the rain of love
As defusing golden light
Coming right from the Sunshine’s illuminating light,
Falling on me like the first rain droops,
And embracing me with love and pleasure 
Which perhaps I can not define.

Ravindra

Kanpur India         27th May 2010

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Andrea Dietrich August 12, 2010 at 9:05 PM oh, here is a lovely one I missed. I will have to return to a long tme ago to catch up on the continuing saga you have begun again! Luv, andrea

Oscar Mascarenhas June 16, 2010 at 9:35 PM beautiful, beautiful, simply beautiful the way you described it, beautiful cheers oscar

Sara Kendrick June 11, 2010 at 3:51 AM I especially like this one...Great metaphoric language usage..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Brian Strand June 10, 2010 at 12:50 AM Yes Ravi sunshine gives everything a different complextion.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 9, 2010 at 8:07 PM Elegance of beauty Ravindra in such a lyrical pice of poetry.. very visual view of the sun bursting through the clouds and spreading its light of luv surrounding the viewer... I can now enjoy such beauty too..its all its glory... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2010 at 8:55 AM Such a radient write , so much uplifting beauty to this one, enjoyed..p.d.

June 8, 2010 at 12:09 PM I really like the uplifting feel of this poem. You have me smiling with your words. What a lovely view. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Oscar Mascarenhas June 8, 2010 at 7:58 AM sunshine.....we get that a lot in mumbai.... so im tired of it.... But the way u described it here, it make me want more... lovely piece cheers oscar

Skat A June 8, 2010 at 7:18 AM VERY LOVELY RAVINDRA. A LOVELY MOOD OF POETRY.-IRMA

Carrie Richards June 8, 2010 at 7:18 AM Oh, I love this so much Ravindra. This is one of my favorites. So lovely.... :) Carrie

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2010 at 7:12 AM Full of life Ravindra, sunshine dreams with lots of pleasure to read. Enjoyed poet D.