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The Sunshine

The Sunshine The Sunshine was not far away from me in the sky, Surrounded by clouds, It was piercing them, to spread its light. My dreams and hopes too are rising like sea waves, Touching the sky, Oh, in such a lovely mood, I can feel the rain of love As defusing golden light Coming right from the Sunshine’s illuminating light, Falling on me like the first rain droops, And embracing me with love and pleasure Which perhaps I can not define. Ravindra Kanpur India 27th May 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/12/2010 9:05:00 PM
oh, here is a lovely one I missed. I will have to return to a long tme ago to catch up on the continuing saga you have begun again! Luv, andrea
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Date: 6/16/2010 9:35:00 PM
beautiful, beautiful, simply beautiful the way you described it, beautiful cheers oscar
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Date: 6/11/2010 3:51:00 AM
I especially like this one...Great metaphoric language usage..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/10/2010 12:50:00 AM
Yes Ravi sunshine gives everything a different complextion.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/9/2010 8:07:00 PM
Elegance of beauty Ravindra in such a lyrical pice of poetry.. very visual view of the sun bursting through the clouds and spreading its light of luv surrounding the viewer... I can now enjoy such beauty too..its all its glory... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/9/2010 8:55:00 AM
Such a radient write , so much uplifting beauty to this one, enjoyed..p.d.
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Date: 6/8/2010 12:09:00 PM
I really like the uplifting feel of this poem. You have me smiling with your words. What a lovely view. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:58:00 AM
sunshine.....we get that a lot in mumbai.... so im tired of it.... But the way u described it here, it make me want more... lovely piece cheers oscar
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:18:00 AM
Oh, I love this so much Ravindra. This is one of my favorites. So lovely.... :) Carrie
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:18:00 AM
VERY LOVELY RAVINDRA. A LOVELY MOOD OF POETRY.-IRMA
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:12:00 AM
Full of life Ravindra, sunshine dreams with lots of pleasure to read. Enjoyed poet D.
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