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THE SUNSET GLORY

The fading 
sunset
With its 
pale 
tint of 
orange
Life is 
memory.





This is my 
first ever 
Haiku...something 
new 
that I've 
wrote.

Watisungla 
Ao,23rd 
sep 
2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/25/2013 6:00:00 PM
life is a gorgeous memory!
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Watisungla Ao
Date: 4/27/2013 5:55:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem..with warm regards,Watisungla :)
Date: 11/21/2012 8:29:00 PM
W. A.,,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Watisungla Ao
Date: 4/27/2013 5:54:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem..with warm regards,Watisungla :)
Date: 11/21/2012 7:51:00 PM
Nice to meet you. Light & Love
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Watisungla Ao
Date: 4/27/2013 5:52:00 AM
Thank you for reading my poem...with warm regards,Watisungla :)
Date: 10/22/2012 1:58:00 AM
Lovely Haiku ! Have read this before - but MUST read it again- New starting you also - we will learn from each other. - Have a nice new week. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Watisungla Ao
Date: 10/24/2012 9:11:00 PM
Hello again Anne,what would I say to you - thank you for reading again :) ,and yes you are right - we will learn from each other.Hugs,Watisungla
Date: 10/9/2012 1:06:00 AM
Watisungla, Beautiful "Haiku"... I love writing haiku poems...you are to be commended for a first try. Often written 5-7-5...others not so strict. You can google "How to write Haiku" for clarity. Also Senryu... Cynthia (hope you don't mind)
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Watisungla Ao
Date: 10/24/2012 9:06:00 PM
Hi Cynthia,thanks for helping me out.And not to worry,I don't mind at all. You are always welcomed :)
Date: 9/25/2012 5:58:00 AM
thanks so much for your encouraging comment. you have a good nib for haiku..... you are blessed in JESUS NAME, AMEN.
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Date: 9/24/2012 8:44:00 AM
a memory to capture it is, a lovely haiku, ....p.d.
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Watisungla Ao
Date: 9/24/2012 6:45:00 PM
P.D Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment :) hugs,Watisungla
Date: 9/23/2012 1:58:00 PM
It's beautiful for your first one. normally they are just three lines. If you just said "pale tint of orange" as your second line, taking out the mesmerizing part, it would be more like a contemporary haiku. Keep it up. Good work!
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Watisungla Ao
Date: 9/23/2012 9:09:00 PM
Andrea,thank you for the suggestion...hope next time i would write better..and thanks for stopping by my poem :) hugs,Watisungla.
Date: 9/23/2012 11:34:00 AM
I'm not good with haiku. Yours is very well written.Bravo Watisunqla! Have a wonderful Sunday afternoon. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Watisungla Ao
Date: 9/23/2012 9:12:00 PM
Anne thank you for visiting my poem :) hugs,Watisungla