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The Sunset Glory

The fading sunset With its pale tint of orange Life is memory. This is my first ever Haiku...something new that I've wrote. Watisungla Ao,23rd sep 2012

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2013 6:00:00 PM

life is a gorgeous memory!

Watisungla Ao
Date: 4/27/2013 5:55:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem..with warm regards,Watisungla :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 8:29:00 PM

W. A.,,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Watisungla Ao
Date: 4/27/2013 5:54:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem..with warm regards,Watisungla :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/21/2012 7:51:00 PM

Nice to meet you. Light & Love

Watisungla Ao
Date: 4/27/2013 5:52:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poem...with warm regards,Watisungla :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/22/2012 1:58:00 AM

Lovely Haiku ! Have read this before - but MUST read it again- New starting you also - we will learn from each other. - Have a nice new week. - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Watisungla Ao
Date: 10/24/2012 9:11:00 PM

Hello again Anne,what would I say to you - thank you for reading again :) ,and yes you are right - we will learn from each other.Hugs,Watisungla

Date: 10/9/2012 1:06:00 AM

Watisungla, Beautiful "Haiku"... I love writing haiku poems...you are to be commended for a first try. Often written 5-7-5...others not so strict. You can google "How to write Haiku" for clarity. Also Senryu... Cynthia (hope you don't mind)

Watisungla Ao
Date: 10/24/2012 9:06:00 PM

Hi Cynthia,thanks for helping me out.And not to worry,I don't mind at all. You are always welcomed :)

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 9/25/2012 5:58:00 AM

thanks so much for your encouraging comment. you have a good nib for haiku..... you are blessed in JESUS NAME, AMEN.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/24/2012 8:44:00 AM

a memory to capture it is, a lovely haiku, ....p.d.

Watisungla Ao
Date: 9/24/2012 6:45:00 PM

P.D Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment :) hugs,Watisungla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2012 1:58:00 PM

It's beautiful for your first one. normally they are just three lines. If you just said "pale tint of orange" as your second line, taking out the mesmerizing part, it would be more like a contemporary haiku. Keep it up. Good work!

Watisungla Ao
Date: 9/23/2012 9:09:00 PM

Andrea,thank you for the suggestion...hope next time i would write better..and thanks for stopping by my poem :) hugs,Watisungla.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/23/2012 11:34:00 AM

I'm not good with haiku. Yours is very well written.Bravo Watisunqla! Have a wonderful Sunday afternoon. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Watisungla Ao
Date: 9/23/2012 9:12:00 PM

Anne thank you for visiting my poem :) hugs,Watisungla