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The Sunset

Tonights sunset was so beautiful
The sky was pink and gold,
The clouds made marvellous patterns,
A spectacle to behold.

I stopped to watch its artistry,
Skeleton trees in silhouette,
The sun sat heavy on the hedge,
A sight I won't forget.

I dreamt I looked at heaven,
I was connected to my soul,
This magnificent ball of fire
To God I must extol.

As the colours gently fell
Much lower in the sky,
The darkness followed slowly
As the day said its goodbye.

The end had been amazing,
A blessing from above
A vision of perfection,
Sent with all Gods love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/31/2017 4:49:00 PM
Oh my god! You described it perfectly! I love the feeling I get when I read this!! It's so awesome! Great job and thanks for commenting on my poem! - Raina
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/1/2017 12:44:00 AM
Thank you for commenting. I love looking at the sky and this particular sunset was glorious.
Date: 3/9/2017 1:25:00 PM
love it beautiful
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/9/2017 5:39:00 PM
Thank you. I so enjoyed reading your poems earlier.
Date: 2/22/2017 6:42:00 AM
Perfect 7
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 2/22/2017 6:51:00 AM
Thank you for the 7 and for visiting my poems.
Date: 2/8/2017 3:37:00 PM
Great poem created lovely images, a joy to read, Roy.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 2/8/2017 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Roy for all your lovely comments. I took some beautiful photos of this particular sunset, it was so magnificent.