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The Sun's Lover

I will always love the Sun My love is never done; Like him, there is only one By his warmth, my heart was won. His brightness makes him a shining icon He never wanes – I wonder, is he made of iron? When he leaves, the whole world yawns But I’ve been waiting to be with him for aeons. When he sees me, he blushes vermilion And this, the world calls dusk or dawn. For a few hours, we rule the sky as one And wait the rest of the time for a rerun. For some, I may look like a loon; But that’s just me, his lover – the Moon.

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Date: 12/7/2023 1:55:00 PM
Amazing poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Veena Venkat
Date: 12/7/2023 8:52:00 PM
Thanks a lot....this forum is very encouraging for amateurs like me
Date: 12/6/2023 11:06:00 AM
Lovely poem Veena, it rhymes very well..
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Veena Venkat
Date: 12/6/2023 9:56:00 PM
Thank you :)

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