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The Sun's Encased inside My 'Bic'

Arid eyes burn in the Mohave heat where Camels eat and smoke dehydrated Frosted Flakes with mold and disease on them . . . preserving this mirage of life.

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Date: 5/25/2024 10:43:00 PM
i see the "Sun" escaped your "pen" and spilled all over your slip dear poet....and thankfully so.....have an awesome Summer....much love
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Benjamin Bartley
Date: 5/26/2024 2:26:00 PM
How'd you know I wear a quilt in the summer when it's hot out?
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Benjamin Bartley
Date: 5/26/2024 10:30:00 AM
I will. You have a wonderful Summer too!

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