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The Sunburned Girl

The sunburned girl smiles Patches of warm memories Some pain hurts so good.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/13/2013 3:21:00 PM
Creative winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/5/2013 8:58:00 PM
I really relate to this one, being someone who burns easily but who adores the sun. LOVE this. Congrats on the winner's list.
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Date: 6/4/2013 10:43:00 PM
Melani, enjoyed your senryu. Congrats!! In Susan's contest... xox~ Linda
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Date: 6/4/2013 10:42:00 PM
lol, Melani, so true about the sunburn pain and fun, good write, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/4/2013 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Melani xx
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