The Sun the Flawless One
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I started this as a tanka. I went two syllables over.
His highness peeping
Over a spectacular horizon
He comes blazing bathing the
Day with Rays of warmth
His penetrating gaze
Racing through impeccable skies
To his flawless event he slowly
Bows casting ripples out to
The other side through darkness
Of dusk a quiet yawn
His THRONE
Rising dawn
flames from ocean To desert
He's known
Copyright © Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther | Year Posted 2017
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