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The Sun Sinks Blood Red

the sun sinks blood red. . . 

in the trunk of his car

her fading cries

deathsenryu

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Phyllis Babcock

March 29, 2014 at 10:36 AM

A crime that is happening. Gives you a shudder to think of that scene. Nice senryu.love phyl

Poet Destroyer A

March 16, 2014 at 10:48 AM

ps...wow! What's going on in this senryu... Seems, like a crime.... I posted a new poem... Enjoy it when you have time.. xox ~Linda

Poet Destroyer A

March 16, 2014 at 10:46 AM

Hello, Andrea... How are you? I was smiling because, you read my Brokeback Mountain poem... LOL.. Out of all the ones you could have read... hehehehe... PD

Skat A

February 26, 2014 at 8:51 PM

good one Andrea, xox~ SKAt

Nette Onclaud

February 21, 2014 at 4:14 PM

wow,, very visual, andie.. cheers to you for your shining win!.. huggs

Joseph May

February 21, 2014 at 12:28 PM

Congrats on a fine win Andrrea

Shadow Hamilton

February 21, 2014 at 11:32 AM

congrats on win hugs

Shadow Hamilton

February 21, 2014 at 11:28 AM

so much from so few words Andrea excellent pen Hugs

Sara Kendrick

February 21, 2014 at 10:01 AM

Way to go..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

February 20, 2014 at 7:21 PM

Dark and powerful image. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Huberta Van Akkeren

February 20, 2014 at 5:18 PM

Wow very powerful I agree with Ruben a story in just three well worded lines Congrats on your win

Gary Watkins

February 20, 2014 at 10:53 AM

Ooh, I love this one, Andrea! Very dramatic and sinister. Congratulations on the win.

Stephen Kilmer

January 27, 2014 at 9:41 PM

metal chairs painted in the desert. stacked outside a bar. green and red remind me of these fading cries. So sad and sanguine. ~Kilmer

Monterey Sirak

January 24, 2014 at 7:24 AM

Oh my! These few lines pack a monster punch. Sad and powerful.

Jack Horne

January 23, 2014 at 3:36 PM

wow, love this!!

Erich Goller

January 22, 2014 at 10:17 PM

that's an emotional expressed poem.Thanks for sharing it, God bless you, Hugs!Erich

Robert Pettit

January 21, 2014 at 7:18 PM

I hope the car was not sinking to the bottom of a lake! Good write as usual, Andrea.

Andrea Dietrich

January 23, 2014 at 7:43 PM

that would be better for her than what he probably has planned!! But she is almost dead anyway.

Kelly Deschler

January 20, 2014 at 8:39 PM

A very dramatic and haunting poem. You've got so much impact here with just a few lines. Really well done, Andrea!...This reminds me of the song, "Stan" by Eminem...Thank you very much for the kind congrats on my poem.

Connie Marcum Wong

January 19, 2014 at 1:04 AM

Chilling Andrea. Very impressive!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 18, 2014 at 5:26 PM

- Andrea ::::::: B R A V O !! - W O O o o W !!!!!!! - Have a enjoyable weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Johnson

January 18, 2014 at 2:22 PM

This is why I click the channel, it's just too much to take. The horror's in life our fellow man some how seems to partake. But when the echoes of her breath have stained our human hearts. Let's hope that someday's coming soon when evil finally parts. Peace. :)