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The Sun Shines Brightly

The sun shines brightly, it's a beautiful day I watch the diamonds ripple on the water by the bay If I could only hold your hand We could sit here and hear the band Oh no~the sky is turning gray What can I say Will we need to stop our play This weather was not planned The sun shines brightly.... Did you see the big flying blue jay The four kids went that way With all of this sun they will be well tanned The party is not on the sand but on the land Did you know it is his birthday The sun shines brightly.... Date Written: 4/17/2022

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Valsa George

Date: 4/19/2022 10:04:00 PM

The Birthday party seems so enjoyable in such a lovely ambiance ! All the Best, dear Paula, in the contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/20/2022 8:00:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this fun/happy write. The beach is a great place for a party. Have a blessed day.................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/19/2022 5:06:00 PM

Enjoyed the happy tone of your poem, Paula. Best for a win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/20/2022 7:59:00 AM

Thanks for writing and for your best. Glad you enjoyed this happy write. Have a blessed day.................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 4/18/2022 2:57:00 AM

Now this is another form I have yet to try..You are very adventurous Paula, you have created an uplifting poem. If only the sun would shine brightly...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/18/2022 7:31:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun write. Rondeau was new for me. You should give it a try. Have a blessed day.................

Deb M

Date: 4/17/2022 9:55:00 PM

A lovely bright poem Paula….enjoyed reading it….Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/18/2022 7:29:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day.................