The Sun Shines Brightly

The sun shines brightly, it's a beautiful day
I watch the diamonds ripple on the water by the bay
If I could only hold your hand
We could sit here and hear the band
Oh no~the sky is turning gray
What can I say
Will we need to stop our play
This weather was not planned
The sun shines brightly....
Did you see the big flying blue jay
The four kids went that way
With all of this sun they will be well tanned
The party is not on the sand but on the land
Did you know it is his birthday
The sun shines brightly....
Date Written: 4/17/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 4/19/2022 10:04:00 PM
The Birthday party seems so enjoyable in such a lovely ambiance ! All the Best, dear Paula, in the contest!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/20/2022 8:00:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this fun/happy write. The beach is a great place for a party. Have a blessed day.................
Date: 4/19/2022 5:06:00 PM
Enjoyed the happy tone of your poem, Paula. Best for a win.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/20/2022 7:59:00 AM
Thanks for writing and for your best. Glad you enjoyed this happy write. Have a blessed day.................
Date: 4/18/2022 2:57:00 AM
Now this is another form I have yet to try..You are very adventurous Paula, you have created an uplifting poem. If only the sun would shine brightly...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/18/2022 7:31:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun write. Rondeau was new for me. You should give it a try. Have a blessed day.................
Date: 4/17/2022 9:55:00 PM
A lovely bright poem Paula….enjoyed reading it….Debx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/18/2022 7:29:00 AM
Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day.................
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