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The Sun Rises--The Moon Sets

The Sun Rises- -The Moon Sets Think of life, the cycle of How radiation can support life, enough heat to Ensure a stable self sustaining system. Something like our RA, peasants producing Under this celestial god. He may be dull at times, but Never far from active. Rising to all inhabitants. Imitated by many, but none can capture Something so surreal. For many hours Everything thrives into productivity only to Soon fade. Telescoping images of you in the night How warm is your glow soft blue white Ever circling the world we call home Master of revolution, elliptical, precise Omnipresent, effervescence Orb of the night, silent in flight Never failing, glowing light Shimmering beauty, through magnified eye Emitting a wondrous, magnificent sight Torched your surface, by meteor showers Shine again tomorrow, I'm forever yours This poem is written in the Acrostic style by father and son.. SUN written by son, MOON written by father 2009...........Jared Pickett and Richard Pickett

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Date: 2/17/2014 9:01:00 AM
A beautiful poem between father and son. -SKAT
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Date: 8/5/2010 10:25:00 PM
a very touching acrostic written by father and son with wonderful flow combined as well much feelings in every line,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 2/24/2010 7:59:00 AM
One for the favourites JP some excellent imagery in this difficul form.Rgds Brian & thanks for your encouraging words today & comments
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Date: 1/20/2010 6:35:00 AM
Wonderful of my favorite forms...Marty
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Date: 1/19/2010 2:46:00 PM
Great team success on this one Jared. Wonderful! Congratulations on an awesome collaboration. hmmm - Ask your dad if he remembers me .... Who is he now? I Bartholomue wan't it?-Robert
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Date: 1/19/2010 12:40:00 AM
Jared, I like the idea that you and your father wrote this together. (I guess I just assumed that you were the son???) Anyway, the father and son idea is great. The blend of your styles was perfect as was the flow of the poem. Very nice. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/18/2010 7:36:00 PM
I love this. How wonderful a poem worked on together between father and son. I am so inspired! And the write is beautiful, the words so very descriptive, presenting great imagery. This goes to my fav. today. Thanks for sharing. What a nice read at the end of the day! And thank you for your kind comments on my latest poems. Much appreciated, my friend. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/18/2010 12:03:00 PM
I can see father and son are travelling on the same moonbeam...
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Date: 1/18/2010 10:47:00 AM
Nice father and son endeavor Jared. Liked your play on words, Good job. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 1/18/2010 10:21:00 AM
nicley done, enjoyed reading today!!
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Date: 1/18/2010 9:33:00 AM
Great idea here in this co-written Acrostic. I saluate you two. Thanks for the kind comments on all my work of last few days. Sara
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