**For the Suzette Richards Phoenix Sixain Contest
But, what if the sun, too, needs a savior? Like an eternal gem that beams upon dreary dawns set upon her, draining every heavy lampshade of stars within spheres. A savior eternal, dawns on heavy stars… ~ Inspired by the poem "Sun too needs a savior" posted: 8/22/2023
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