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I dare to hope and dream, Of flowers that never fade Of splendid and exotic creatures All living in perfect harmony. I dream of tranquil earthly paradise, A keen euphoric garden of Eden, Created by my one and true Lord. Alas that man sinned and now The garden of Eden is closed. So let us together embark upon a journey, In earnest search and ardent expectation Of peace and love and blissful pleasure. Let us travel down a mighty river In a small pirogue, winding its way Along the fern lined banks Admiring the Cyprus and the tall pine trees. The river turns into a valley, Where mighty willows weep and dip Their lower branches in the fresh icy stream. All around, we smell the scent of flowers, Butterflies with gossamer wings Flit untiringly from bloom to bloom While insects seem to have composed A lively concert of their own. We hear the music of the song birds, Especially the multicolored martin pescador, Finches practicing their fine tunes to serenade the attractive female mate. We spy warblers, sparrows, and orioles Dancing from branch to branch Or birds of prey soaring over the ancient firs Trying to catch some unsuspecting fish That swims beneath the calm surface Of a smooth and tranquil lake. Such magic moments mesmerize our senses, As we witness the birth of day. We find ecstasy in Our Lord's creations. His wondrous hand enhances nature, Fascinates our spirit with uninhibited joy Expanding the joyous hope for all humanity.

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Date: 10/20/2022 4:03:00 AM
Though Garden of Eden is closed for Adam and Eve, on earth, there are places and scenes on par with the heavenly paradise----"Butterflies with gossamer wings Flit untiringly from bloom to bloom While insects seem to have composed A lively concert of their own"..The poem is full of such lovely descriptions ! Much enjoyed!
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Date: 10/20/2022 5:31:00 AM
Thanks for reading my poem, dear Valsa.
Date: 2/4/2021 11:02:00 AM
WoW! Victor, Your imagery and descriptions were wonderful. All of creation is wonderfully made; your well-written write expressed that very well. Good content as well. I enjoyed the read. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/4/2021 5:59:00 AM
Awesome!
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Date: 2/4/2021 5:36:00 AM
A poem so rich in descriptions Victor. I see so many beautiful lines on Lord's creations. Great imagery. God bless ~ Ani
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Date: 2/3/2021 10:56:00 PM
A sigh of beauty, but only the Lord can bring to us. We write them in words, or paint, or articulate, but we just don't do the justice only the Lord have made. Wonderful inspirational write. Hugs eve
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Date: 2/3/2021 3:14:00 AM
A wonderfully written poem, love the beautiful imagery, especially the birds!
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Date: 2/2/2021 1:56:00 PM
a bright poem making me think of when spring will come again with the birds and beautiful flowers. Very nice,Victor.
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Date: 2/2/2021 12:39:00 PM
Your poem is wonderfully well written, Victor, with beauty and a touch of magic! :)
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Date: 2/2/2021 9:05:00 AM
Your words paint a perfect portrait for all of us to enjoy. Have a great day, Victor :)
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Date: 2/2/2021 8:54:00 AM
such magic moments captured in poetry, your faith shines out my friend. i find the beauty of my surroundings inspires many a poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/2/2021 7:55:00 AM
You've created a shangri la with your words Victor, superb imagery. Tom
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Date: 2/2/2021 6:44:00 AM
Beautiful!!! Lovely imagery and great verses throughout... I enjoyed it ...
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Date: 2/2/2021 6:35:00 AM
Enjoyed the sights and sounds on your journey, Victor. As always, every detail adds to your painting -- and every stanza creates a new scene. Excellent.
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Date: 2/2/2021 6:22:00 AM
I love your romantic and passionate story told in poetic form. Like you said the Garden Of Eden no longer exist. It would be nice and in romantic thoughts it can exist. Your visits to my page are always encouraging. Sara
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Date: 2/2/2021 2:11:00 AM
I love this one, Victor... it's mesmerizing and I'm faving it. God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/2/2021 1:06:00 AM
Enchanting poetry,Victor, loved the images you create:) "We find ecstasy in our Lord's creations" - how true!!
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