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The Sun Is Out Shining

I dare to hope and dream, 
Of flowers that never fade
Of splendid and exotic creatures
All living in perfect harmony. 
I dream of tranquil earthly paradise,
A keen euphoric garden of Eden,
Created by my one and true Lord.
Alas that man sinned and now
The garden of Eden is closed.
 
So let us together embark upon a journey,
In earnest search and ardent expectation
Of peace and love and blissful pleasure. 
Let us travel down a mighty river
In a small pirogue, winding its way
Along the fern lined banks
Admiring the Cyprus and the tall pine trees.
 
The river turns into a valley,
Where mighty willows weep and dip
Their lower branches in the fresh icy stream. 
All around, we smell the scent of flowers,
Butterflies with gossamer wings
Flit untiringly from bloom to bloom
While insects seem to have composed
A lively concert of their own.
 
We hear the music of the song birds,
Especially the multicolored martin pescador,
Finches practicing their fine tunes
to serenade the attractive female mate.
We spy warblers, sparrows, and orioles
Dancing from branch to branch
Or birds of prey soaring over the ancient firs
Trying to catch some unsuspecting fish
That swims beneath the calm surface
Of a smooth and tranquil lake. 

Such magic moments mesmerize our senses,
As we witness the birth of day.
We find ecstasy in Our Lord's creations. 
His wondrous hand enhances nature,
Fascinates our spirit with uninhibited joy
Expanding the joyous hope for all humanity.
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George Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 4:03 AM
Though Garden of Eden is closed for Adam and Eve, on earth, there are places and scenes on par with the heavenly paradise----"Butterflies with gossamer wings Flit untiringly from bloom to bloom While insects seem to have composed A lively concert of their own"..The poem is full of such lovely descriptions ! Much enjoyed!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 5:31 AM
Thanks for reading my poem, dear Valsa.
Y. Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 11:02 AM
WoW! Victor, Your imagery and descriptions were wonderful. All of creation is wonderfully made; your well-written write expressed that very well. Good content as well. I enjoyed the read. Well done:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 5:59 AM
Awesome!
Jayasankar Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 5:36 AM
A poem so rich in descriptions Victor. I see so many beautiful lines on Lord's creations. Great imagery. God bless ~ Ani
Roper Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 10:56 PM
A sigh of beauty, but only the Lord can bring to us. We write them in words, or paint, or articulate, but we just don't do the justice only the Lord have made. Wonderful inspirational write. Hugs eve
Kitchin Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 3:14 AM
A wonderfully written poem, love the beautiful imagery, especially the birds!
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 1:56 PM
a bright poem making me think of when spring will come again with the birds and beautiful flowers. Very nice,Victor.
Buehler Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 12:39 PM
Your poem is wonderfully well written, Victor, with beauty and a touch of magic! :)
Crabtree Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 9:05 AM
Your words paint a perfect portrait for all of us to enjoy. Have a great day, Victor :)
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 8:54 AM
such magic moments captured in poetry, your faith shines out my friend. i find the beauty of my surroundings inspires many a poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 7:55 AM
You've created a shangri la with your words Victor, superb imagery. Tom
Kannan Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Beautiful!!! Lovely imagery and great verses throughout... I enjoyed it ...
Pandit Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:35 AM
Enjoyed the sights and sounds on your journey, Victor. As always, every detail adds to your painting -- and every stanza creates a new scene. Excellent.
Kendrick Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:22 AM
I love your romantic and passionate story told in poetic form. Like you said the Garden Of Eden no longer exist. It would be nice and in romantic thoughts it can exist. Your visits to my page are always encouraging. Sara
Mcintosh Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 2:11 AM
I love this one, Victor... it's mesmerizing and I'm faving it. God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
Daniel Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 1:06 AM
Enchanting poetry,Victor, loved the images you create:) "We find ecstasy in our Lord's creations" - how true!!
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