The Sun Is a Monster

The sun is a monster,
The stars are monsters,
Monsters that make us spin 
In the universe,
Our planet is so small,
The sun looks at her, like a cat a mouse,
Like a bug,
The sun is a monster,
That one cannot look into the eyes,
a monster who devours his own house, 
A bloodthirsty monster,
Heard millions of miles away,

If this monster wakes up,
It will destroy everything,
Our houses, our armies, our principles,
He will destroy our works of art,
Mozart and Rembrandt,
It will destroy all our ambitions,
To conquer the universe,
 To move our cabinets,
To cook again lobsters,

So let’s be wise,
The monster is watching us,
But he has great appetite,
Let’s not wake him up,
His light is our life,
Where does this monster come from?
No one knows, Perhaps you know?
He comes from far away, no doubt,
From another galaxy,
One thing is for sure,
This monster is more powerful than God,
Let us take advantage of his wickedness,
Let us become gods in our turn,
Are we not monsters?

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Date: 5/25/2025 11:15:00 PM
Try it's a monster. Could devour us in a split second!!
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Date: 9/8/2023 7:29:00 AM
I enjoyed your monsters Yann. I have the same questions. :)
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Date: 8/31/2023 3:22:00 PM
but we wouldn't exist without the sun monster so i am happy he hides at night!. I agree with Paula this is very creative Yann:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/29/2023 9:36:00 AM
A creative write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a great day.............
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/30/2023 1:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula
Date: 8/28/2023 7:28:00 PM
It's easy to feel that way in summer. But in winter it will be your best friend. a pencil can be a monster if stepped on by these terms
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/30/2023 1:20:00 AM
here I can live six months without seeing the sun, i guess in winter i miss him too, thanks for commenting
Date: 8/28/2023 5:04:00 PM
Such a good way to look at the us of Earth compared to that monster of a sun...reminds you how large those things are out there.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 8/30/2023 1:20:00 AM
thank you so much David
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