The Sun Has Come Again

The sun
Has come again
After having been shunned
By the fury of warlike clamor
Of guns.

It was
Time for cease fire
Tired of the endless 
Clashes of unyielding powers
Oppressed.

Now calmed
Wishing the coming
Of the spring season's charm
Washing off the grind in showers
Disarmed.

Breathing
The sweet fragrances
Of new found wider views
That melt the ice and see our hopes  
Renewed.

By CarolineCecile
Copyright © 03.15.10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 2/17/2013 7:22:00 PM
Simply a radiant, beautiful poem! Great job and I love your creativity! Excellent work! I love the ending (the last few lines); they have a feeling of hope and renewal! :DD ~~ D.W.Breidenthal
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Date: 3/18/2010 7:28:00 AM
Yes, this is very creative, Caroline. WEll done! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/18/2010 5:57:00 AM
Great write, Caroline. I like your ue of multi-Cinquain. Comparing winter to "Clashes of unyielding powers" is innovative. I'm writing some multi-Cinquain these days. Love it. Love, daver
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Date: 3/17/2010 2:59:00 PM
Wonderful poem Caroline >> James
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Date: 3/17/2010 8:37:00 AM
Great comparisms, Caroline! The sweet fragrances Of new found wider views That melt the ice and see our hopes Renewed. I like these lines! Und danke fuer die Kommentare! Alles Gute...Gert
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Date: 3/17/2010 7:03:00 AM
solid endingto this gret write indeed true talent shown here my friend really liked this write great flow to it
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Date: 3/15/2010 9:14:00 PM
And how we welcome the sun, Caroline!! Another beautiful write to welcome spring..Thank you for reading and posting those kind comments for me, my friend! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/15/2010 5:26:00 PM
Great write that could be interpertated several ways..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/15/2010 4:56:00 PM
enjoyed
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Date: 3/15/2010 4:53:00 PM
Beautiful and hopeful cinquain! Love the comparisons made between nature and war zone....very creative, Caroline! Love, Carrie
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