The Sun and the Moon

the Sun and the moon

two loyal fellows
have never met each other
the sun and the moon
are showing off
their charm

new day has come!
new day has come!

sweetest greeting 
of the brightest sun 
shines and smiles
uncover the curtain of a new day
cease the flounder
welcome the wonder

beautiful nightfall 
has turned up with peace !

admire the milky moon face
gleam with its beauty
of sparkling stars

for they have never known
each others‘ grandeur
let’s sing a morning hymn
and a night carol
to let them know
how we admire them all

~ Sukmawati Komala~
2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/17/2014 12:26:00 PM
Su; This is a beautiful poem. I love to read poems about the sun and the moon. I have one here about that 9 ( The Moon Cried ) Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 6/19/2014 3:34:00 AM
Thank you deary Lucilla my beloved sista... appreciate so much your valuable comments <3 much love to you :)
Date: 6/2/2014 9:24:00 PM
Just beautiful and so inspirational. Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 6/19/2014 3:35:00 AM
thank you my friend Pandita Sanchez.. appeciate so much :) have a wonderful day :)
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