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The Sun and the Moon

the Sun and the moon two loyal fellows have never met each other the sun and the moon are showing off their charm new day has come! new day has come! sweetest greeting of the brightest sun shines and smiles uncover the curtain of a new day cease the flounder welcome the wonder beautiful nightfall has turned up with peace ! admire the milky moon face gleam with its beauty of sparkling stars for they have never known each others‘ grandeur let’s sing a morning hymn and a night carol to let them know how we admire them all ~ Sukmawati Komala~ 2014

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Date: 6/17/2014 12:26:00 PM
Su; This is a beautiful poem. I love to read poems about the sun and the moon. I have one here about that 9 ( The Moon Cried ) Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 6/19/2014 3:34:00 AM
Thank you deary Lucilla my beloved sista... appreciate so much your valuable comments <3 much love to you :)
Date: 6/2/2014 9:24:00 PM
Just beautiful and so inspirational. Thank you for sharing!
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 6/19/2014 3:35:00 AM
thank you my friend Pandita Sanchez.. appeciate so much :) have a wonderful day :)

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