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The Summer Morn

The warm summer morn Came slowly onto this land Spreading the delicate perfume And filling the vale to the brim Unaware of the miseries down there She brought gifts for all Gifts of ripe and juicy fruits Gifts of sweet smelling flower The green grass swayed with pleasure The brook rose up to meet her The birds started their welcoming songs To see the last of winter But down there Men killed men And women cheated each other Totally ignorant of the summer morn Children were bought up with bad words The clouds of hatred The mist of distrust Enveloped the whole city The soft summer morn stayed on Trying hard to spread joy But the ripened fruits were stolen And fresh flowers were crushed The city became dark and desolate The grass bowed its head The brook dried The birds prepared to leave The soft summer morn sadly turned away The chilling frost settled happily The place became quiet and dead With dreams of a beautiful morn By Tahera Mannan Sunrise For HG’s contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/26/2011 6:30:00 PM
Tahera! A pleasure to see your poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/26/2011 12:16:00 PM
Tahera,many congratulations on your win....
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Date: 5/26/2011 3:18:00 AM
Many congrats Tahera on big win in HG's contest with this excellent entry. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/25/2011 6:14:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your awesome win in this contest by HG with this vivid and vibrant entry my friend.. enjoy another wonderful win with luv.. how are u doing my friend?
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Date: 5/25/2011 4:32:00 PM
Beautiful, sad and all too true. Well done Tahera. Congratulations. Lvoe, joyce
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Date: 5/25/2011 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG, Tahera
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:47:00 PM
You tell um honey it's not all a bed of roses even when the sun does shine, a proud true write, sadly I can see it all too well, those who have not visited 3rd world countries don't know the half of it. CONGRADS Light & Love [miss talking to you]
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:16:00 PM
Creative ...Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/12/2011 8:06:00 AM
Wow this is such a deep take on the contest, Tahera-- I really liked how you went with this one and with a moral too--you got me hooked with this wonderful poem-- and hoping and praying for your speedy recovery from your surgery, thank you for letting me know... hugs :)
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Date: 5/3/2011 7:02:00 AM
Good imagery in this poem, with a moral to it.
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Date: 4/25/2011 3:30:00 PM
wow, you took this to another level and made it symbolic and loaded it with imagery. A VerY good entry. It's well written, deep and enjoyable to read. God luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/25/2011 6:30:00 AM
Beautiful images surround this piece Tahera luv and perfection of beautiful thoughts u present my friend.. good luck in new contest.. mine will be abount sunset I think.. it has always fascinated me.. enjoy a very pleasant week..of creativity and luv..
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