The Sum

The Sum By Benjamin Mui I am not a failure Nor am I a success I am not my rejections Nor am I my acceptances I am not worthless Nor am I special I am not my weakness Nor am I my strength I am not a loss Nor am I a triumph I am the sum of Nothing Neither the bad Nor the good Not who was Nor whoever is to come I am what is Now I am who I choose to be I am my actions … I am

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Shane Thacker

Date: 6/20/2023 8:10:00 AM

I absolutely love this. Well done, Benjamin.

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/15/2023 7:16:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.