The Suicide Crime Scene

Our feet patter a dusty tune
Edinburgh traffic plumes
One good eye surveys the scene.

Suddenly – a flash of yellow
Dashes across blurred vision
Police line - do not cross.

Curiosity beats a steady rhythm
We weave through traffic
Feel the shame of indiscretion.

Once at the tall railings
You hoist me up to look
I feel cold metal chafe my hands.

Peeking over, I gasp at the drop
gazing down at the street below
A screen obscures the view.

“Please get down from there!”
I drop down, grab your hand
We run away like naughty children.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Whitlock-Ishway Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 4:36 PM
What a dramatic yet, poetic memory you have penned.
Foulk Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 1:41 PM
very creative piece of fine poetry, enjoyed reading it. thank you for commenting on Summers Gone By.
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