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The Suicide Crime Scene

Our feet patter a dusty tune Edinburgh traffic plumes One good eye surveys the scene. Suddenly – a flash of yellow Dashes across blurred vision Police line - do not cross. Curiosity beats a steady rhythm We weave through traffic Feel the shame of indiscretion. Once at the tall railings You hoist me up to look I feel cold metal chafe my hands. Peeking over, I gasp at the drop gazing down at the street below A screen obscures the view. “Please get down from there!” I drop down, grab your hand We run away like naughty children.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/8/2012 4:36:00 PM
What a dramatic yet, poetic memory you have penned.
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Date: 6/21/2011 1:41:00 PM
very creative piece of fine poetry, enjoyed reading it. thank you for commenting on Summers Gone By.
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