The Succubus and the Werewolf

I come up behind you
      from the shadows,
laying my left claw
across your stomach,
    the very tips
        barely breaking the skin
and you gasp
    as I slide 
        the backside of my right
down your cheek,
placing my lips
    against 
  the back edge of your ear, 
running my tongue,
          delicately
  down the back of it
     sending a tremor
 through your body.

I nip 
  the top of your ear
between two of my canines
    hardly drawing any blood
and you flinch
             into me,
pressing yourself
  so tightly into my embrace
that we feel as one.
I coil my fingers 
   around your lower jaw
      and turn your chin
away from me,
            exposing
the tender skin of your neck
  to my personal whims.
As I graze your moon white skin
       with my fangs
you release a whimper
  that sends chills
      down my spine,
almost turning my knees
                              to water.

Sliding my left paw
    down your right hip
        and thigh
           slowly,
my other
  gripping the back of your neck
I spin you to the ground
                beneath me,
press my lips to yours
      softly at first
then almost viciously
    as you begin to hunger
        for the taste of me.
You bite my lip
               splitting it
   then suck on it
       pulling my blood from it
and as our tongues 
    dance together
my mind drifts
    in the euphoria
that oozes off of you 
        soaking into my pores.

Pushing me up
   you cut into my chest
      with a spike tipped finger
then sink your fangs into the wound
                  and begin to drink.
Throwing back my head
    I savagely howl
from the pure ecstasy of it all,
   shaking the very ground
we lay upon,
        vibrating the moon.
You stop for a breath
   and I snap my jaws 
      into your flesh
         beginning my own feast,
biting into thigh,
         hip,
    belly,
        breast,
and I work my way,
        back down
to your inner thigh.
     You tangle your claws
    in my hair,
        holding my head in place
 and scream,
               splitting the heavens.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 8/31/2009 3:52:00 AM
totally amazing!!!!!!! i've always loved creatures of the night like the succubus and the incubus and their sexual mystical ways. the way you use this imagery in such a raw passionate poem astounds me. love it love it love it.
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