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The Subway

Dark subway tunnel
Damp, rank scents surround, but then
Falling bright lights drew me near
Cobalt blue engaged my eyes
A vacuum pulled me to The Light

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2019

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February 27, 2020 at 6:05 PM

Beauty uplifts the otherwise mundane experience. Like the way your poetry improves the negative with the positive.

February 29, 2020 at 6:58 AM

Gail, Thanks for your uplifting comments. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

September 27, 2019 at 9:16 AM

lovely descriptions here, my friend

September 27, 2019 at 6:46 PM

Jack, Thanks for the visit to my page. Glad you liked the description. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

August 23, 2019 at 2:41 AM

I think this may be the way we will be pulled home.

September 27, 2019 at 6:46 PM

Caren, Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

August 20, 2019 at 12:09 PM

Exactly how I perceive the subway too, Sara. Nicely done. Best wishes, Gershon

August 22, 2019 at 8:01 AM

Gershon, Thanks for the visit to my page. Maybe I need to go see what the subway is about then again maybe not. Sara

August 20, 2019 at 10:43 AM

nicely penned Sara...makes the reader want to go visit the subway...great poem~ :) hugs

August 22, 2019 at 5:51 AM

Sandra, Thanks for your visit. I don't think I really want to visit the subway but it might be an interesting extravaganza. Sara

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