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Dark subway tunnel Damp, rank scents surround, but then Falling bright lights drew me near Cobalt blue engaged my eyes A vacuum pulled me to The Light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/27/2019 9:16:00 AM
lovely descriptions here, my friend
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2019 6:46:00 PM
Jack, Thanks for the visit to my page. Glad you liked the description. Sara
Date: 8/23/2019 2:41:00 AM
I think this may be the way we will be pulled home.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2019 6:46:00 PM
Caren, Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Date: 8/20/2019 12:09:00 PM
Exactly how I perceive the subway too, Sara. Nicely done. Best wishes, Gershon
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2019 8:01:00 AM
Gershon, Thanks for the visit to my page. Maybe I need to go see what the subway is about then again maybe not. Sara
Date: 8/20/2019 10:43:00 AM
nicely penned Sara...makes the reader want to go visit the subway...great poem~ :) hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2019 5:51:00 AM
Sandra, Thanks for your visit. I don't think I really want to visit the subway but it might be an interesting extravaganza. Sara
Date: 8/20/2019 9:07:00 AM
Perfect description of the subway. Well done.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/20/2019 9:27:00 AM
Victor, Thanks for dropping by. I have no idea about a subway for I have never been in a subway station nor ridden on a subway. It was just guesswork. Sara