The Subway

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Dark subway tunnel Damp, rank scents surround, but then Falling bright lights drew me near Cobalt blue engaged my eyes A vacuum pulled me to The Light

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Gail Debole

Date: 2/27/2020 6:05:00 PM

Beauty uplifts the otherwise mundane experience. Like the way your poetry improves the negative with the positive.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/29/2020 6:58:00 AM

Gail, Thanks for your uplifting comments. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 9/27/2019 9:16:00 AM

lovely descriptions here, my friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2019 6:46:00 PM

Jack, Thanks for the visit to my page. Glad you liked the description. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/23/2019 2:41:00 AM

I think this may be the way we will be pulled home.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2019 6:46:00 PM

Caren, Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/20/2019 12:09:00 PM

Exactly how I perceive the subway too, Sara. Nicely done. Best wishes, Gershon

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2019 8:01:00 AM

Gershon, Thanks for the visit to my page. Maybe I need to go see what the subway is about then again maybe not. Sara

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/20/2019 10:43:00 AM

nicely penned Sara...makes the reader want to go visit the subway...great poem~ :) hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/22/2019 5:51:00 AM

Sandra, Thanks for your visit. I don't think I really want to visit the subway but it might be an interesting extravaganza. Sara