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The Subject is Your Mind While Sleeping

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Poetic Form: Personification
Inspired: 2024 August 23
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A sullen sickness befallen me from whence a darkening ventured nigh and stolen the sparkling embodiment features of stars in the gloaming of the mundane hovering misery of shooting dead stars aloft my head aches now fevers the whole of me afire unceasing as it spreads and grasp my soul this simple cover to shield the chill that stills my blood like frost to ice and flits burning back to hell's hold temporal twas until the perspectives exchanged one to the other who now lays its claim and tortuous name being Dante I wrapped myself and snuggling in hopes to shrug off this biting cold that locks its icy grip on my body and soul if not for the beating of my heart that it reassures me that soon it will pass and end malady pursual of my deepening doctorless gloom that will drift a parting long-awaited since at first my eyes had closed and will soon be opening to the welcoming vision of her striking ascent prepare myself for that cure is here ... Aurora.

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